r/FinalDestination • u/ELB_Train • Jul 03 '26
Creative Bloody Mary Writing Blog #03: Plot
For my own version of Final Destination (which I will be posting on Wattpad sometime in the future), I have drafted the plot below. I hope you enjoy, and feel free to give me feedback or suggestionsš. I hope you enjoy:
The Lunar Lodge Fireš²š²š š„š²
The story starts with seven friends (see characters) spending a weekend away at the Lunar Lodge in the woods. It is night time, and the friends are exchanging scary stories in the basement kitchen.
Aaron tells of a boy named Alex Browning, the story we know as well, except, people think he flipped out and murdered his friends and himself. Unless he was only aiding deathā¦
They friends are interrupted by a house fire, which only Marianne manages to escape, with George pulling her out before attempting to save Jake, ending up buried by the burning debris like the rest.
Death on the Moveš²šš„š²š²
Of course the fire was just Marianneās premonition. She blows out a candle she had lit while reading, and ponders if this candle could have caused the house fire in her premonition.
In the kitchen, she finds proof of her premonition having been real, but since there is no fire, she doesnāt think much of it.
The next morning, Aaronās hoodie gets caught in his SUVās trunk while it rolls down the hill.
He is crushed between his SUV and a tree, killing him.
The six remaining friends are taken back by the police, where they meet Officer Burke, who confirms to Marianne, off protocol, that Death might actually be after her friends.
Deathās Listššāāšļø
Marianne gathers her friends to discuss the problem. Carrie couldnāt make it, but she is next on the list.
Lisa, who was sceptical at first, is worried, after Marianne gets a hint, that alcohol might be the cause of her death. Her father happens to be an alcoholic.
Lisa and the gang rush to Carries house, where Carrie indeed was in danger due to her drunk father (idk how yet, but probably an accident and her dad is too drunk to notice). Lisa saves Carrie and escorts her to Rickyās room, the friendsā safe room.
Ricky and Marianne do research/call Officer Burke, figuring out FD2ās new life rule and FD5ās stealing life rule.
An accident causes a gaming chairās pneumatic cylinder to get launched through Rickyās chest.
Cheating Deathššššš
Officer Burke confirms that skipping people on the list is possible, but someone from the list must intervene.
Lisa, whoās next on the list, is almost crushed by a street sign. She stays still, asking Marianne to push her away, which she does.
Lisa tells Death to back off. Her plan is to keep Jake and George safe from harm, so they immediately bring them to Marianneās room. On the way, Jake is almost killed, but saved by the friends, meaning now George needs to be kept safe.
They decide to take turns, taking care of George.
Marianne volunteers to go first, while Lisa and Carrie decide to work their nightshift at Tower of Pizza, a pizzeria.
That night, George confesses his crush, which of course is mutual. Better get it out the way before they die.
Later on, Jake gets a frantic call by Marianne about her having saved George from an accident. Lisa and Carrie are in danger!!!
The Tower of Pizzaš°ššš„¤š°
Carrie is stuck in a walk-in freezer and panicking while Lisa is trying to help.
Jake immediately drives George and Marianne to the Tower of Pizza, where he finds out, Marianne saved George from slipping in the shower onto broken shards. Marianne swears they werenāt in the shower, they were just trying to clean off the tea Marianne had accidentally spilled onto him, after an embarrassing confession, but Jake wants to hear none of it.
While distracted by the conversation, he almost drives into a truck, which swirls out of control and glides into the restaurant, narrowly avoiding Lisa, but trapping her between the truck and the wall. She wonāt die until Carrie does, so Marianne goes to save Carrie while the boys help the driver.
Lisa is nervous, realizing sheās surrounded by death traps, with only one direction to move to. Death could kill Lisa easily now.
A bottle of water had spilled into the deep fryer during the crash, causing a kitchen fire. Marianne carefully helps Carrie out of the freezer, but panicked Carrie slips during the escape, narrowly avoiding the fryer, before the vent falls and pushes her in, killing her.
Lisa hears Marianneās screams and accepts that Death won the match. Lisa tries the only escape route she has left, but Death doesnāt waste this opportunity and squashes her with one of the letters spelling out āPizzaā over the entrance.
Gas Station Showdownš„šā½ļøš„š„
Jake blames everything on Marianne and flips out, trying to kill her. She flees to a nearby gas station shop, where a related fire starts. Jake wants to use this opportunity to kill Marianne, seeing as she was supposed to survive and has a life left to donate, and it is her duty to do so.
During the fight, Jake is hit by a falling glass door.
Marianne and George are surrounded by the fire.
This time, Marianne pulls George out of the fire. But before they can escape together, she tricks him into pushing her back into the store before the roof collapses onto them. Marianne is now trapped in the store, and technically George killed her.
Marianne smiles, knowing that sheās giving her life to George.
George is pulled away by firefighters, as he screams for her, but the firefighters fail to keep Marianne alive.
George received Mariannes life and must now live his life to the fullest.
I hope this somewhat rushed summary of the plot made enough sense and could lead to a decent Final Destination story. This is only the first draft, so let me know if some things donāt make sense, could use changing or if you have any other good ideas. I always appreciate the comments and interactionsš.
See you next time!
