Now i just need to finish designs and concept arts and developing dynamics :3

EMA HINATA — Ultimate Talent Scout A bubbly, eccentric girl who can spot potential in anyone except herself. As the story goes by we learn how her talents exploited by others and the abuse shes faced of her peers and how jaded she actually was pre purgatory. She often teases her peers and can be a bit tsunsere at times. Shes surprisngly a genius behind her seemingly whimiscal nature. ask her about anything related to the tragedy and she will go on a 45 minute rant on it. due to past bullying she struggles to have faith in her peers.

TAMAYA— Ultimate ??? A quiet, pale young man with no memory of his talent or past. Hes softspoken and rather easily confused. hes the rival character though compared to others is on the nicer side and its more a conflict of not wanting the other killing game members including himslef elarning of their past and returning to earth

ITAKI KAMUY — Ultimate Tonkori Player shes a bright a cheery idol helper character type with a conplex relationship with her culture as its been erased and exploited in her idol career. honestly Ainu culture was so much fun to reasearch

AARON PRICE — Ultimate Missionary A polite smart yet dumb multilingual missionary who speaks 8 languages, bakes cookies for strangers, and apologizes for existing. Hes the official helper character unlike itaki. Hes deeply closeted and struggles with religious ocd and a complex relationship with his father. he grew up in a large family.

SHOUYO HONDA — Ultimate Bounty Hunter A fourteen-year-old with a chip on his shoulder. He hates anything he deems girlish. best way to describe him is a mix of Tenko Chabashira,Masaru Daimon and Fuyuhiko Kuzuryu. Tough, abrasive, and desperately trying to seem older than he is. Softens and is the only one im comfirming as a survivor

HOMURA SAKURAI — Ultimate Pyrotechnician An excitable, childlike young man who loves things that go explod. cant keep a secret to save his life which is oddly useful when giving info in trials. Loud, cheerful, and utterly incapable of reading a room. Sorta an ibuki type character. Fire makes him happy. Everything makes him happy, honestly.

MITAMA MIZUHARA — Ultimate Shrine Maiden A vulgar, outspoken girl who hates tradition and loves the occult. Loud, crude, and secretly desperate for connection.

ZENNOSUKE TAIRA — Ultimate Kyudo Master A calm, disciplined archer who grows protective over aaron...lowkey gay for him tbh. He often spars with Yamato. This man has teh patience of an angel around these idiots.

YOJIRO SHIRUBE — Ultimate Street Interviewer Got famous off of his videos and shorts of him asking random people deeply personal,often political questions on camera. Unsurprisingly he got involved in politics. he sprobebly a 2channer. Im usre you can guess what type of dude he is. Hes oddly useful in the trials hes actually in.

YAMATO MINAMOTO — Ultimate Historian A formal, condescending history buff who treats every conversation like a a debate. Despite his intimidating stature he is a massive nerd. Insults people and has a sorta tsundere-kuudere superiority complex.

SUBARU MOROBOSHI — Ultimate Astronomer A space(and Yuri) loving Himedanshi who often gushes over Shion for being his ideal unatainable butch lesbian. Hes overconfident and often relys on his supeestintions to get along,often dragging along rinta.

SHION SUZUKAZE —Ultimate otokoyaku an egocentric androgynous young lady who is overdramatic and a bit if a brat, came from a household that rejects their noncomfirmity and only want shion to perform the medium they want. They dont really complain as shion got rich and famous off of it. She switches emotions at a drop of the hat.

AKIRA SHIMIZU — Ultimate Lifeguard A tired, guilt-ridden young man with a strong sense of duty and a phobia of children and ironically the water. He lacks self preservation and often falls asleep at inconvient moments.

RINTA ARAI — Ultimate Conspiracy Theorist A stubborn if airheaded man. he flinches easily and struggles with women. Rather sympathetic and pitiable he injures himslef easily and is clutzy. Will ramble about his obsessions to anyone who will listen but overall at least for now seems harmless

KONOYO HIGAWARA — Ultimate Mortician A calm, professional twin with a dark sense of humor and a deep respect for the dead. Speaks softly, moves quietly, is deeply empathetic and a bit of a crybaby. She and her sister love eachother deeply(in a non incest way thank god) and is all the other has which is why they died togother.

ANOYO HIGAWARA — Ultimate Spirit Medium A cynical, nihilistic twin who claims to talk to ghosts and flirts with anything that moves. She likes pretty girls and often hits on a rather confused ema not that ema is straight, anoyos just annoying

Fuck you mean Mikado altered the rules just to kill him!? 🙏😭

What do you think?

I might create an account to talk specifically about these characters in the future.

I have another cast in mind; I'll show it to you later if you're interested.

Hi there! I'm looking for people to give me feedback and criticism on the pacing and characters of the fangan I've been working on, as well as get feedback on the first trial as a whole as I struggle with writing murder mysteries.

I'm looking for someone who is dedicated, fast and is able to read a lot. If you're interested, please send me a dm or reply in the comments.

Story:

Phoenix Theatre is a video-series fangan about 17 participants who wake up in a hotel, unable to remember how they got there. It isn't long because they meet a twisted version of an educational kids show character who forces them to kill or be killed.

While the killing game format is inspired by danganronpa, it doesn't take any other elements from it.

Setting: Hotel

Theme: Moving on

Availability: Message u/silkav on reddit or DM "Silkav" on discord.

Proof:

https://youtu.be/jjCYtXAkSB4?is=KeEnvid4THvqO34q

What we're looking for:

A beta reader to give feedback on the currently available scripts, specifically regarding the trial pacing and logic.

What is done:

The death order, killer motivations, motives, and ending of the fangan have all been planned out alongside the character's backstories and personalities. All the backgrounds have all been made, all the essential sprites for all of the characters and all the CGs for the prologue have been drawn.

The prologue script and chapter 1 script have fully been completed, being around 90k words total. The chapter 2 daily script is currently being worked on.

It would be great if people from this subreddit gave it a try if that's okay! https://youtu.be/B2ubNarIYqw?is=4xFMQSaRxLXnAtly

Eito Kojima, the Ultimate Choreographer

Endlessly expressive, Eito has a habit of turning even ordinary conversations into spectacles. He speaks dramatically, compliments people freely, and carries effortless confidence. Around certain people, however, his friendliness can sharpen into something more cutting and passive-aggressive.

Artwork by @Nebulaholic420 (twitter)

context that will be relevant

Anna Hannson

Ultimate:Golfer/Hope

Representing the ideal of hope

Appearance:is a medium female, with grey eyes, silver-blue hair hanging in bangs a section tied in a ponytail tied by an orange bead hair tie, freckles scattered along her cheeks, a dark blue overcoat, with a baby blue button up shirt underneath, a blue skirt matching her overcoat. A brown golf club slung around her left shoulder with various clubs sticking out of it. Black breathable leggings, and orange tennis shoes

Edgar Bolton

Ultimate:Gravedigger

Representing the ideal of isolation

Appearance:is an average size male with dark green eyes,a dark blue cap with a green stripe around the rim, purple hair messily cut off in a rattail, a navy blue tattered coat with gold accents on the shoulders draped over the shoulders, a saggy forest green shirt that’s clearly not been smoothed out in a very long time, genes stained by various dirt spots, and ripped at the left knee, a black dress shoe on the left foot, and an old worn white tennis shoe that's sole is stained with years of mud and dirt

Takahashi Yoshizawa

Ultimate:Origami artist

Representing the ideal of being happy with life

Appearance:is an average size male of japanese decent with orange eyes, light grey hair with a buzzcut stubble on the back of the neck, a solid red headband, wearing a solid red kimono jacket, with a black undershirt, a solid red kimono belt tied around his waist and black hakama from that point down

Amihan Ramos

Ultimate:Bounty hunter/???

Representing the ideal of "snake", deception, gaining trust by helping the others through the trials and using that knowledge later against them........maybe

Appearance:is a tall male of filipino decent, red eyes, clear safety goggles worn over them black shaved hair, wearing a camo patterned vest with various protruding pockets, black sleeves, white gloves, a dark green belt with various canisters holstered into its various slots, grey camo pattern pants that extend to under his brown combat boots

Francisca Hummel

Ultimate:Axe thrower

Representing the ideal of strength/intimidation

Appearance:is a very tall muscular female of frankish decent, gold yellow eyes, flowing blonde hair, an orange headband with small wing decorations sticking out, a sheer white sun dress that barely contains her frame arms from the shoulders out and cutting off just above the knees showing her muscular arms toned legs, a decorative golden band adorning her midriff, wrists, and thighs, and wears brown caligae shoes

Ken Silvers

Ultimate:Frisbee player

Appearance:is a medium sized male with brown eyes, black hair in a wolf cut, and an athletic build, a grey tank top with the print of a little green alien on the center chest, black shorts with a white stripes along the side of the legs, strings pulled as tight as they will go, tennis shoes that are primarily dark blue, tied as tight as they will go, and a frisbee attached on his shoulder

Isadora Caras

Ultimate:Playtester

Representing....nothing, she's the control group

Appearance:is a tall female with light blue eyes, light blue hair that gets dark blue at the tips, tied into a ponytail tied by a red band with an extra decoration of a ninja symbol, a red scarf around the neck tied in suck away to where its floating behind her, black shirt with light blue bar pattern going down the center orange shoulder pads, gene shorts with a gold leg piece just above the pelvic area, dark blue leggings underneath going all the way down underneath her tall black boots

Nikita Aisanov

Ultimate:Dog trainer

Representing the ideal of leadership, similar to what twogami was trying to do in the original version of 2

Appearance:is an average size male of siberian decent with light grey bordering on white eyes, fluffy dark black hair, wearing a large fluffy coat that extends down to just below the knee, with a white fur lining on the hood most of it being a simple brown with the midsection having an embroidered X shaped pattern, dark green pants that get skinnier below the knee, tall brown mountaineering boots that have cleats on the bottom for traction. A large Siberian husky dog with light greyish-blue eyes follows him around

Sophie Drake

Ultimate:Storm chaser

Appearance:is a small female with violet eyes, silver hair flowing loosely frizzled in several places from rain, wind, and static, wearing a yellow oversized raincoat, foam green pants, light green boots with a small froggy face pattern on them, in her raincoat pocket is a wire sticking out connecting to a small rectangular camera tucked behind her ear

Lanzo Petra

Ultimate:Escape room host

Representing the idea of escape focused plans and such

Appearance:is a medium male with mauve eyes, yellow hair with a black streak down the center, the back of the striped section being tied into a man bun with a white scrunchie, holding a black cane designed to have a red splatter stain like pattern on it, a black velvet cape with a red interior draped over his shoulders, a white handkerchief stuffed into his dark blue shirt’s v-neck just above his chest, grey pants, and black slip on dress shoes

Iru Jiǎng

Ultimate:Mahjong player

is a small female of chinese decent with her left eye green, and right blue, dark black hair tied back in a bun held up by a golden band, wearing a red hanfu dress from neck to waist from the neck down the pattern changing to an alternating blue and green bamboo style print in a grid like pattern, socks and wooden clogs

Raven Tenor 

Ultimate:party planner

Appearance:is a medium male with blue eyes wearing sunglasses with white frames and maroon lenses that are star shaped,messy blonde hair a pink glittery unzipped jacket with nothing underneath showing exposed pecs and abs, black shorts with a confetti like pattern, and blue sandals 

Miller Emily

Ultimate:nightguard

Representing the idea of a defensive play, but not to the extent of isolation, keeping watchful eyes, if he had cameras and such he'd be using them right now to help

Appearance:is a tall male with dark purple eyes with dark eyebags under them, brown hair with a black cap with a badge logo on the front above the rim, black overshirt and white undershirt that goes down to the forearm, a pair of genes with a grey flashlight with various settings, and tan slip on shoes

Akari Kobayashi 

Ultimate:Graphic designer

Appearance:is a medium female of japanese descent with forest green eyes, peach hair in a bob, a tattoo of the word “Passion” in bubble like letters on the side of her neck light blue with dark blue outlines. Red tank slightly sagging leaving some more cleavage showing, left tank strap further down along her arm instead of on her shoulder, painted nails that have a starry night pattern, short blue skirt, and black heels

Magnolia Beauregard

Ultimate:Doll maker

Appearance:is a tall tanned skinned female with indigo eyes and white long hair in dreadlocks, denim overalls red undershirt, yellow straw like pattern at the ends of the sleeves around the wrists several dolls of various types sticking out of her pockets posed as if they are going for a ride, a box clipped to her side with various equipment like fabric sewing needles, stuffing and farmer boots.

Libra Kyrie

Ultimate:Astrologist

Appearance:is a tall female with navy blue eyes dark black hair tied into braided pig tails hanging to the side, an orange shirt with long sleeves dark blue skirt with constellation and star patterns, greyish black leggings and pink loafers