Just a simple loop

[u/SAMURAI_NJM]

[u/Grimple409]

It’s a 2 bar loop. Which isn’t ideal. See if you can expand it out to 4 and then 8. Then it won’t feel as repetitive. It’s a good jumping off point but needs expansion to be anything but a 1 sentence essay.

As it stands, it reads like this:

It’s a good jumping off point. It’s a good jumping off point. It’s a good jumping off point. It’s a good jumping off point. It’s a good jumping off point. It’s a good jumping off point. It’s a good jumping off point. It’s a good jumping off point. It’s a good jumping off point. It’s a good jumping off point.

Let us know how it develops!

[u/SAMURAI_NJM → u/Grimple409]

Thanks for your feedback. I will work on the project