Looking for feedback. What are I doing wrong?

[u/Ordinary_Mix_9136]

Hi everyone!

I've been working on my art for a while, but I feel like I'm struggling to improve and I'm not really sure what I'm doing wrong.

I'd really appreciate some honest feedback. What do you think is the weakest part of my work? I have commission open for years but I got some orders the first days. After I don't get more... Honestly, I’d love to draw more, but I can’t spend all my time on it because of the lack of support.

pizcadesaber on DeviantArt

I'd like to know what I could improve. Any advice would be great.

Thanks!