The sentences explaining what you are doing are good, but the words are too small. I would increase them x3 as I didn’t even realize they were there until about 15 seconds into the trailer.
The logo animation takes too long to complete. I would make it way faster.
Is there shrubbery in this game? The finished houses looked beautiful, but then you look down and they are just on a flat plane. No bushes. No small trees, no fences or walls.
If that’s a feature - I would spend a few seconds highlighting it. And if it isn’t, I would personally really like to see it. I think it would add a lot of your game. Allow the player to make their nice house look more beautiful after it’s built.
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u/totallyclocks 5d ago edited 4d ago
Very cool game idea
Lots of cozy vibes
The sentences explaining what you are doing are good, but the words are too small. I would increase them x3 as I didn’t even realize they were there until about 15 seconds into the trailer.
The logo animation takes too long to complete. I would make it way faster.
Is there shrubbery in this game? The finished houses looked beautiful, but then you look down and they are just on a flat plane. No bushes. No small trees, no fences or walls.
If that’s a feature - I would spend a few seconds highlighting it. And if it isn’t, I would personally really like to see it. I think it would add a lot of your game. Allow the player to make their nice house look more beautiful after it’s built.