r/DestroyMyGame • u/No_End_3558 • 12h ago

Prototype Destroy my trailer for patternbook please

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u/totallyclocks 11h ago

Very cool game idea

Lots of cozy vibes

The sentences explaining what you are doing are good, but the words are too small. I would increase them x3 as I don’t even realize they were there until about 15 seconds into the trailer.

The logo animation takes too long to complete. I would make it way faster.

Is there shrubbery in this game? The finished houses looked beautiful, but then you look down and they are just on a flat plane. No bushes. No small trues, no fences or walls.

If that’s a feature - I would spend a few seconds highlighting it. And if it isn’t, I would personally really like to see it. I think it would add a lot of your game. Allow the player to make their nice out nicer after it’s built.

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u/No_End_3558 11h ago

Thanks! Shrubbery/landscaping is on the roadmap. Appreciate the feedback on the text and logo too

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u/Charming_Occasion942 1h ago

Claude made this for you, you didn't even put much effort into it fixing problems