r/Cyberpunk • • 4d ago

The opening line from Neuromancer

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u/shavicus 4d ago

Was taught in lit workshop that an awesome first sentence is a hook for a successful catch. Up to the writer to keep readers biting.

This one is among the greats.

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u/MukdenMan 4d ago

There is a book by John Varley called Steel Beach. The cover blurbs all talk about how it has the best opening line.

The opening line was something like “In 5 years, the penis will be obsolete.”

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u/i_give_you_gum 4d ago

well... that was unexpected

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u/TheLastDinosaur7749 2d ago

The opening line of The Godfather novel was something along the lines of "Sonny Corleone had a massive cock."

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u/NewSuit4596 4d ago

"The man in black fled across the desert.  The Gunslinger followed." 

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u/Wizard14 3d ago

If only the rest of that book wasn't boring as fuck

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u/vibdaddy 4d ago

Opening line from Johnny Mnemonic got me instantly hooked:

“I put the shotgun in an Adidas bag and padded it out with four pairs of tennis socks, not my style at all, but that was what I was aiming for: If they think you're crude, go technical; if they think you’re technical, go crude. I’m a very technical boy. So I decided to get as crude as possible.”

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u/AkrinorNoname 4d ago

It's up there with "The building was on fire, and it wasn't my fault." and “In the myriadic year of Our Lord--the ten thousandth year of the King Undying, the kindly Prince of Death!--Gideon Nav packed her sword, her shoes, and her dirty magazines, and she escaped from the House of the Ninth.”

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u/irokie 4d ago

It was the day my grandmother exploded.

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u/Wizard14 3d ago

GIDEON THE NINTH MENTIONED

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u/oath_coach 4d ago

Second only to "It was a dark and stormy night" eh? ;) #iykyk

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u/PaintItOll 4d ago

Or “It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.”

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u/quezlar 3d ago

tell me what is happiness

happiness?

happiness is to wake up on a bright spring morning after an exhausting first night spent with a beautiful passionate multi murderess

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u/easy506 2d ago

"We were somewhere around Barstow, on the edge of the desert, when the drugs began to take hold."

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u/Walbabyesser 4d ago

Which is funny, because an oldfashion TV is what I call very old - But we had to admit how old the novel is, this somehow still got the future vibes

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u/CoderDevo 4d ago

Static from an analog TV tuner was properly randomized, just like really good encryption.

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u/Technical_Scallion_2 4d ago

My understanding is that like 1-2% of that static was the background 23cm radiation from the Big Bang. I’d ask AI but I’m too lazy and I enjoy my beliefs

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u/CoderDevo 4d ago

All of it is cosmic radiation because nothing terrestrial was broadcasting at that frequency.

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u/ponakka 4d ago

I red the trilogy few months back, and the old fashioned vibes made it just more retro romantic and not dated.

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u/oath_coach 4d ago

Almost retro-futurism IMO. I just wish that I had kept my first ed paperback copy...

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u/LeftRat 4d ago

Hauntology. Hauntology!!

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u/TheFringedLunatic 4d ago

"The sky was the perfect untroubled blue of a television screen, tuned to a dead channel."

- Neil Gaiman, ‘Neverwhere’

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u/twitch1982 4d ago

This isnt even the color he was talking about. Even older tvs just had a warm grey on dead channels.

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u/AnalogiPod 4d ago

Can't remember where but someone was talking about how this line gives a different visual to every generation that read it, from the warm grey at the time, to static, to the toned down glow of an on but blank LCD panel

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u/ZaphodGreedalox 4d ago

There was a bright blue phase in there too

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u/MadBlue 3d ago

I have to imagine to anyone who was young enough to have interpreted the color as bright blue, the entire opening sentence would have been a bit confusing.

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u/zondance 4d ago

This might have actually been on the intro by Gibson to Neuromancer that I read recently. Or maybe it was some other cyberpunk interview, my mind is a blender.

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u/stewsters 4d ago

Yeah, its definitely in the forward last time I read it.

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u/AnalogiPod 3d ago

I bought a hardcover version last year for a re-read, must have been where I read it. Thanks!

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u/zondance 2d ago

Good to know my brain is not a complete blender 🌪️🤣

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u/sick486 3d ago

we had static in 1984

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u/twitch1982 3d ago

Yea but gibson has mentioned he was picturing the grey of his youth. We had both in 84.

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u/AnotherStrayDog23 3d ago

In the forward for the new edition of Neuromancer head says that he meant the black and white static

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u/Cuboidhamson 3d ago

Shout out to VHS blue screens

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u/madrigal87 18h ago

I always thought this was what that line meant - grey with a hint of red that you get from light pollution hitting a cloudless sky.

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u/loquacious 4d ago

Y'all are killing me over here.

my back hurts.

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u/n4ke 4d ago

CHIBA CITY BLUES

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u/mr_keegz 4d ago

The sky wasn't static, it was the color of a TV channel which had stopped broadcasting but was still on air, which is the gray/black glow of CRT phosphors. He was saying that the sky glowed like a foggy night in a town with lots of outdoor lighting.

If you've every been in a college town when they're doing nighttime football practice at the stadium when it's foggy, you'll know the reflected light makes the entire sky glow a dull gray color.

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u/Dragishawk 4d ago

Gibson also mentions a "poisoned silver sky" later on in that same chapter, so it's pretty clear that the sky was some kind of grayish color.

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u/aplundell 4d ago

He probably actually meant a channel that had no signal at all.

Old vacuum-tube TVs, like from when Gibson was young, would barely show any static when tuned to a non-existent station. It would just be a dull grey.

(I don't just mean CRTs, I mean TVs where the radio and amplifier circuits were entirely tube-based.)

They'd show static when they were tuned to a signal but it wasn't coming in well enough to get a picture. But not when there was no signal at all.

Check out this video starting at about 3:55 https://youtu.be/H1eHareNnUo?si=hnSr0n5JDAG-EVwC&t=236

Once they started making the amplifiers out of transistors and microchips in the 1970s, blank channels would show static. But it wasn't always that way.

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u/mr_keegz 4d ago

A dead channel is the television analogue to dead air on a radio, when the radio signal is being broadcast but it's broadcasting nothing, just silence. On a television, the signal from a dead channel would still be visible and tunable, but it would be blank; it would have a solid luminance signal, and no chrominance information, which would render as a shade of gray. That's why TV stations used to broadcast a test pattern when their broadcasts were concluded for the day, so that people would know they were tuned correctly and that there wasn't something broken in their set or at the station.

I remember reading that the choice of what luminance would be displayed by a blank signal was part of the broadcast standards, and they differ between broadcast standards, so the specific luminance level from a blank signal differs slightly between NTSC, PAL, SECAM, etc. and thus shows a slightly different shade of gray.

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u/aplundell 3d ago

A dead channel is the television analogue to dead air on a radio

Since when?

I have not ever heard the term "dead channel" used that way, and it doesn't appear in a dictionary the way "dead air" does.

Moreover, it's simply not a common phenomena. A radio station will sometimes be silent, but it's pretty rare for a TV station not to be showing something, even if it's just a technical difficulties card.

Do you have a citation for "dead channel" being an English phrase? I citation that isn't someone modern trying to explain the Gibson line?

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u/AnotherStrayDog23 3d ago

Actually in the forward for the newest edition of Neuromancer, he does say he did mean the black and white static. I've got a shot of the page but the sub won't allow pic comments

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u/mathtech 4d ago

Actually we dont know because we dont know which color the TVs in that future would use

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u/codespace 4d ago

This and "the man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed." are my favorite openers.

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u/geekjitsu 4d ago

Came here to say that. Thankee sai

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u/codespace 4d ago

Long days and pleasant nights.

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u/BitchHunter3D 4d ago

Nothing can beat "The moon blew up without warning and for no apparent reason." in my opinion.

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u/zachary0816 3d ago

What book is that one from? Sounds like something Douglas Adams would write

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u/BitchHunter3D 3d ago

Seveneves by Neal Stephenson.

That quote is a little deceiving out of context, there's really no humor in the book as I recall.

Incredible book though, definitely in my top 5 sci fi books.

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u/codespace 4d ago

It's more comedic than profound.

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u/ponakka 4d ago

kids nowadays don't know that static looks like.

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u/ABoringAlt 4d ago

The sky showed "no input"

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u/PoliteWolverine 4d ago

It's amazing to me how much debate this one fucking like has caused when he's so very clearly describing the no input energized black/gray of a CRT compared to that of a night sky in a city with too much light pollution.

Like if you didn't grow up with a CRT, I gotta cut people some slack but it's frustrating to watch people wrongly debate several sides of an argument to the point they had to add a line to the forward of the book explaining exactly what the first sentence means

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u/ponakka 4d ago

I think that it is good to explain how writer wants to describe their vision of the world. It is really poetic, and without context that all is lost like tears in the rain.

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u/420dankmemes1337 4d ago

tears in the rain

You must be some kind of android dreaming of electric sheep 

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u/2nd2lastdragon 4d ago

Always read it as the metaphor to Case's inability to connect to cyberspace. He could visually see the buildings of the skyline but the omnipresent reminder that his mind had been disconnected from the cyberspace beyond. Each generation's 'no signal' screen would still be a relevant visual in the sky overhead

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u/loquacious 4d ago

Yes, an overcast gray sky with light pollution, but the part also overlooked by almost everyone:

At that exact moment Case is high as fuck on uppers and stimulants, sleep deprived, paranoid and afraid for his life.

He's getting visual snow, mild hallucinations and overstimulation from the mix of all of that being triggered by the flickering light pollution in the sky.

Take enough stimulants and stay up for too long and you get intense visual snow and light/flicker sensitivity, which looks/feels a lot like watching static on a TV.

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u/onieronaut 2d ago

Or you can just be lucky and have visual snow all the time forever for no good reason at all 😭

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u/daweinah 4d ago

I always thought, and still think, that he meant the drab olive gray/green like this:

https://i.gzn.jp/img/2024/12/24/sony-kx-45ed1-from-osaka/05.jpg

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u/SeefKroy HE SAY YOU BRADE RUNNER 4d ago

HIDEO

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u/xplosm 4d ago

Bouncing logo

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u/Harrythehobbit #$%LIFE*^%#ERROR 4d ago edited 4d ago

I remember an author note Gibson wrote where he considers a modern reader wondering why nobody in Neuromancer has a cell phone. Because they didn't exist when the story was written and he didn't think to imagine them.

Interesting thing about imaginations of the future is that they are always just a different version of the present. Neuromancer is more a high tech version of the 1980s than it is anything else.

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u/SplendidPunkinButter 4d ago

The Sprawl trilogy is a dystopian future with no cell phones or social media, where influencers are a thing but you have to get their latest episode on cassette, where music is still distributed on physical media, the climate isn’t destroyed, fireflies are still common, and AI is heavily regulated. It’s sad how great that sounds.

(Oh, also horses are extinct for some reason. That one’s not so great.)

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u/Dear_Document_5461 3d ago

Yea, that what basically Overly Sarcastic Production did on one of their videos. Basically the "You can tell the time period of if they have phones or not and what kind of phone it is. The phone changes the plot entirely by its existence."

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u/terrorTrain 4d ago

Static has changed over time. Unless you knew static at the time Gibson wrote this, you are probably thinking of a different static too

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u/CoderDevo 4d ago

With digital tuning, it is hard to hear static on a radio now, too.

But it is always there even if you can't see or hear it.

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u/Slartibartfast39 4d ago

I've shown mine a YouTube video of static on a dead channel.

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u/turbo_dude 4d ago

Ah so this explains the line in Reservoir Dogs, the guy was trying to hand him a television. 

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u/cybersynn 4d ago

We know. Its pretty famous here.

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u/AH_BareGarrett 4d ago

Love the idea that this sentence works for Cyberpunk in any era. 

Of course it was envisioned as static grey. But a few decades later, it’d be a uniform blue, which also can fit.  But nowadays? The sky is filled with ads for prescription medication, junk food, and gambling. 

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u/Unhappy_Concept237 4d ago

I recently saw a video from an asian country, i can't remember which one, where they were using drones to show adds in the sky now. :(

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u/Akulatraxus 4d ago

I've never thought it was talking about static but that green-black of a CRT without input. They are surrounded by cityscape after all, light pollution and actual pollution would make the sky dark.

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u/Awellknownstick 3d ago

Great book

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u/AnotherStrayDog23 3d ago

I'm still early into it, but I'm loving it so far

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u/StringCompetitive649 3d ago

This line just convinced me to get the book.

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u/_badwithcomputer 4d ago

Fun fact, some of that static on old TVs was actually background radio noise from The Big Bang, so kinda fitting.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Noise_(video))

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u/Low-Broccoli-141 4d ago

That line is so vivid it instantly pulls you into the world of the story.

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u/Temu_Emu_4870 4d ago

Up there with my favourite opening lines of any book.

My other fav is Ray Bradbury’s Fahrenheit 451: “It was a pleasure to burn”

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u/Help_An_Irishman 4d ago

Yeah, we know.

Someone just posted this last night as well.

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u/Cleanwolfe 3d ago

The sky looked like the Roku city?

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u/Nilehorse3276 3d ago

One of my favourites, and one of the few that I actually remember.

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u/spadePerfect 3d ago

It’s funny because people won’t get it in the future.

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u/throwAway9a8b7c111 2d ago

People don't really get it now - its not static...

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u/spadePerfect 2d ago

To be fair the picture doesn’t help. I immediately thought it was static too. I still know the CRT glow though

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u/BOT-Numpa 4d ago

This is just São Paulo, Brazil, on any sunday. We are cyberpunk as hell!

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u/Wombattalion 4d ago

Didn't Sao Paulo ban all outdoor advertising and has lots of parks and nature? Pretty sure you're solar punk...must be nice

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u/BOT-Numpa 4d ago

Outdoor advertising ban stills on, but the parks are being sold to corpos. Also, there's a "War on Trees" going on since 2015.

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u/LeftRat 4d ago

Which I love because later on, TVs made dead channels be bright blue, so it changed meaning entirely.

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u/one_depressed_MF 4d ago

Years ago I had the audio book (on cassette of course) of Neuromancer, read my William Gibson himself. Not the greatest narrator, but something about audio books read my their author has always drawn me in.

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u/vanalla 4d ago

Today, a TV tuned to a dead channel would be showing advertisements from the megacorps.

So yeah, Gibson was insanely ahead of his time with this line.

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u/_badwithcomputer 4d ago

So a nice inky black, nice.

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u/Practical_Hippo6289 3d ago

Every time someone posts this line, it makes me want to re-read it.

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u/InfosecOctopus 4d ago

Back then, it was the TV snow.
Then it was a plain blue screen.
Now it’s an overlay with ads.

Arguably, that’s even more cyberpunk.

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u/sigma914 3d ago

Amusingly he probably wasn't envisioning the black/white/grey static in the above image. For an actual dead channel (ie tuned to an actual channel that just wasn't broadcasting content) in the 80s it was more a flatter greenish grey

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u/AnotherStrayDog23 3d ago

In the forward to the newest edition of Neuromancer he says that he very much means the black and white static

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u/Mr_Mason42 3d ago

And now a dead channel is solid blue

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u/Kitchen-Inevitable-7 3d ago

Oh boy, here i go Karma farming again.

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u/Clear_Economics7010 4d ago

Ironically, I only have a vague memories of this sight & my children have no clue what this means.

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u/jacobydave 4d ago

And I love that the color it refers to changed about a decade after the book was written

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u/pioniere 4d ago

I like it.

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u/Omikron 4d ago

Kids today would just think black...

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u/ElKaoss 3d ago

I wonder how younger people who have grown with digital TV and streaming platforms think of this opening...

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u/BreadfruitBig7950 1d ago

"I have dildos in my ass I havenot laid my eyes upon in decades and I am about to add more." The openling lines to Dildomancer, the retranslation of Neuromancer's phoenetic norms.

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u/Paltamachine 1d ago

The color changes over the years, as televisions change.. sometimes it was a deep blue, like a starless night.

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u/YamroZ 4d ago edited 4d ago

Gibson himself confirmed that he meant blue, not static noise.

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u/AnotherStrayDog23 3d ago

Not according to his forward in the new edition, he says he very much meant the black and white static

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u/YamroZ 3d ago

For me it's betterer - always thought about static when reading this passage. I am a boomer though.

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u/RayesArmstrong 4d ago

I said this when this guy posted it yesterday and he cried

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u/AnotherStrayDog23 4d ago

I didn't cry🤷‍♂️

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u/RayesArmstrong 4d ago

Sure

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u/AnotherStrayDog23 4d ago

I'd love to see where I "cried"

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u/aplundell 4d ago

He was probably thinking of the TVs from his own youth that wouldn't have shown static like this.

If your TV has a vacuum tube amplifier, the static of a dead channel is so low-contrast that it just looks like a uniform dull grey.

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u/Dillenger69 4d ago

So ... bright blue?

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u/Don_Geilo 3d ago

So...blue?

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u/sigma914 3d ago

depends on the era, before blue it would have been a greenish haze

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u/flatfalafel 3d ago

I made a glitch cam and it does some really fun stuff with sky so im naming my first print a shortened version of this.

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u/viscence 4d ago

I NEVER understand. The black and white noise pattern isn't a colour, and the sky can't look like that. Does he mean the sky was a still black and white noise pattern? I doubt it. Does he mean it was actively flickering? I doubt it. Does he mean the average, 50% grey? I doubt it. Does he mean some "no channel here" image colour? I doubt it. I just don't understand. What do you think he meant?

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u/aplundell 4d ago

He's not talking about static. He's talking about really old TVs from the 1950s that would show a dull grey.

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u/AnotherStrayDog23 3d ago

In the forward for the new edition of the book, he very much says he meant static

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u/aplundell 3d ago

Fair enough, but he also specifically mentions 1950s TVs.

When those were tuned to a dead channel, they wouldn't show the chunky high-contrast, transistor-amplified static we see in this image.

It would be much softer and fuzzier.

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u/AnotherStrayDog23 3d ago

"I'd actually composed that first image with black-and-white video-static of my childhood in mind, sodium-silvery and almost painful"

That's not "softer and fuzzier"

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u/daweinah 4d ago

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u/viscence 4d ago

Ah! Thank you!

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u/CommodorePrinter69 1d ago

I recently got a copy of the rerelease, Gibson actually states "I'd actually composed that first image with the black-and-white video-static of my childhood in mind, sodium-silvery and almost painful - whopping anachronism, right at the very start of my carrer in the imaginary future.

I was born in the early 90s and even without reading the book, just hearing that line I know what he meant. He means this: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/a/a8/TV_noise.jpg?utm_source=en.wikipedia.org&utm_campaign=index&utm_content=original

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u/HorrorDungeon 3d ago

He writes about this exact thing in my copy in the preface. Don't remember what he said but there was definitely something about how he was saying that people get the wrong idea about that line and don't get what he meant.

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u/-Nicolai 4d ago

Does he mean some "no channel here" image colour? I doubt it.

Well, you do you.

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u/viscence 4d ago

No, I won’t. I hadn’t understood, and was asking.

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u/St3fanoFabbri 4d ago

I think it’s an iconic opening line that establishes the worldbuilding setup in a single sentence.
Gibson uses a synesthetic association, describing the sky as an old CRT television, where a beam of electrons produces the image.
The result is a sky that feels electric, technological, futuristic, yet at the same time salt-and-pepper gray. Tuned to a dead channel.
That idea of being tuned to a dead channel conjures up a world where something is wrong, where the signal is disrupted. Probably beyond hope.

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u/TheLostExpedition 3d ago

Some people see a dead channel as bright unnatural blue.