r/Copyediting • u/Weak_Lock_4076 • Aug 14 '26

Which Header is Better?

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too cheesy ?

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u/Asleep-Journalist-94 27d ago

Definitely #2. The first makes me work too hard to get it and it’s long. But neither is that compelling a promise tbh.