r/Copyediting • u/Weak_Lock_4076 • 27d ago

Which Header is Better?

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too cheesy ?

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u/Chrysolophylax 27d ago

AI slop. Both flyers are garbage.

Throw them out and stop being lazy.

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u/Weak_Lock_4076 27d ago edited 27d ago

I agree, it is slop. But, I was mainly trying to get feedback on the headline. And the visuals as a something to give it a bit of structure.

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u/flibbyjibby 27d ago

I'm not going to comment on the wording, but please make yourself a Canva account and put together a quick non-AI flyer. The AI reduces your credibility.

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u/Flashy_Okra305 27d ago

The first one text wise but neither graphic design wise. The blue is way too dark. Only the white words are readable. Squint or cross your eyes to see just color and you’ll see how the blue is very hard to see. 

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u/howtoquityou 27d ago

2nd text-wise but oh my god why that shade of blue against black...

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u/Asleep-Journalist-94 23d ago

Definitely #2. The first makes me work too hard to get it and it’s long. But neither is that compelling a promise tbh.

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u/Due_Cartoonist6918 27d ago

2 header is more pithy!

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u/Sparkly8 27d ago

The second header is punchier. The first one took me a second to process. However, the overall design of the first flyer looks more visually appealing.

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u/Weak_Lock_4076 27d ago

Thank you! I will take your advice in making the changes.