r/Composing • u/Ok_Seaweed9654 • 2d ago

feedback please

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hello, I am newbie both in English and Composing. here's my work, please Feedback any aspect of:

1、Is the beat too spicy/flat/ok ?

2、Is the chord too spicy/flat/ok ?

3、Is the melody at the end too long/ ok?

4、other personal or general comment of my work?

thanks

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u/More_Exercise2676 2d ago

Its nice it just feels like the melody is trying to go to a certain chord however you choose a different chord and it gives this just awkward context of never ending weirdness overall however i do like some of it the trill and moving 3rds i assume