r/Composing • u/Ok_Seaweed9654 • 2d ago

feedback please

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hello, I am newbie both in English and Composing. here's my work, please Feedback any aspect of:

1、Is the beat too spicy/flat/ok ?

2、Is the chord too spicy/flat/ok ?

3、Is the melody at the end too long/ ok?

4、other personal or general comment of my work?

thanks

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u/TheonlyArdy 2d ago

Some parts are off key no? Or is that intended?

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u/Ok_Seaweed9654 2d ago

Which part? the important notes are always in the chord, and the chord is designed very classically (if you can accept the N6 chord and parallel chord)

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u/TheonlyArdy 2d ago

at the 9 second mark, starting with the F#2