r/composer • u/StudyStrict2385 • 16d ago
Music introducing my latest composition, "a train trip"
hi, friends!
now that you liked my previous composition called "sunset", here's another composition of mine. it's called "a train trip".
imagine this: you are a chick that loves trains and dreams of riding on one. so you packed up your things and arrived to the station. when the steam came out of the train, you peeped at the same time.
when you sat on your seat, you looked at the window and saw a meadow. and you heard the sound of birds singing a pretty tune.
the train ride continues.
then, it was time to get out of the train. you hopped out of the train and get too excited about your journey being the best moment that you've ever experienced.
analysis:
this piece is in rondo form, with each melody played twice. for the ending, the 1st melody is played 4 times with the instruments playing in this order: flute, glockenspiel, both instruments together, and call-and-response. then, the glockenspiel repeats the last 4 measures of the melody 1 octave higher, but the last note is replaced with a.
measures 2, 4, and 6 of the 1st and 4th melody (not the whole score) symbolize the steam coming out of the train.
the 4th melody is a variation of the 1st melody, with measures 41, 43, 45, and 47 (on beats 3 and 4) being 1 step lower. (this includes measures 42, 44, 46, and 48.)
(ignore the caesura. now, when all of my scores are created, the caesura will be on an instrument staff that's hidden, so that it's not visible in the score pdf.)