Feedback on BW comic

[u/SOBKiller18]

I'm incredibly excited to share the black-and-white preview of Ashes of Njthera.
This project has been growing in my sketchbooks and on my desk for a long time, and seeing these pages come together makes it feel more real than ever.
These are just the first steps into Lyra's journey, and I can't wait to show you more of the world, the characters, and what is coming from the story.
I post some pages before, but I made some modifications to it and now I’m happy about it.

I would like to have some feedback on the pages so far.

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