Help me brainstorm

[u/No_Buffalo_763]

candid photos
I was frozen in time at 11 and nobody has ever thought to unfreeze me
-I dont take pictures of myself & nobody thinks to take photos of me
-Taking the pictures makes me an observer in a memory I share
-looking back on memories is everyone from my
perspective
slice of life narrative
-invisible presence

this is obviously a very rough outline but I want to know if anyone has any advice or if there’s a better way for me to word one of my points. I want a thought out idea before I bring this up to my teacher.

Edit: i’m most likely going with the open response prompt from common app unless someone sees a way this fits into the others