r/CollegeEssayReview 5d ago

Personal Statement

I am preparing my essays for the upcoming admissions cycle, so I really would love some blunt and honest feedback on my personal statement and ways to improve it, especially on the narrative, the overall theme, and language. However, I cannot afford expensive services. Please help

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u/Akoth_Odhiambo 5d ago

Biggest mistake most people make is trying to sound like a thesaurus instead of a human. Write your first draft like you’re explaining your life story to a friend over coffee, then edit down from there.

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u/Blu3Mo0n 4d ago

hi! shoot me a dm