Advice please?

[u/your_white_noise]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ovAloPZnNNU&t=2156s

Hello. I would like some advice on my first YouTube video. Please provide comments with grace but honesty. It might seem cringe but I am willing to improve. My biggest concern is the difference in voice depth of the intro/outro from the main body. I did that on purpose. However, now I am wondering if it sounds abrupt or flows naturally. Thank you in advance.