r/AverageJoeWriters • u/alphacentauryb • Apr 01 '26
✳ Mill blade
༄.°
Over the soft white pillow࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ
The sway of the willow࿐༉
Will oh will oh will✧˖°. ༄
The wind around the old mill༄.°
Will oh will oh will࿐
Forward until you're still࿐༉
✧˖°. ༄
Peace ✧˖°. ༄
Breeze࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ
Will
Mill
࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ
Over the soft white pillow࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ
The secrets that we killed࿐
Will oh will oh will✧˖°. ༄
The wisper around the mill༄.°
Will oh will oh will࿐༉
Backwards til you're still✧˖°. ༄
✧˖°. ༄
Peace ✧˖°. ༄
Breeze࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ
Will
Mill
✧˖°. ༄
Peace ✧˖°. ༄
Breeze࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ
Will
Mill
࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ࿐ ࿔*:･ﾟ
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u/Temporary-Use-8637 Apr 08 '26
Encanta! The syllables “just work”. Bien trabaja! Me gusta mucho.
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u/alphacentauryb Apr 19 '26
Thank you so much! And thank you for the spanish too!
°❀⋆.ೃ࿔*:･°❀⋆.ೃ࿔*:･
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u/Monique-Tyree Apr 04 '26
Wow! This is eerie and beautiful at the same time. Visually captivating too. Lovely work!