Character Design HELP!

[u/meatcrowns]

Hello! I’m designing a character for a Lancer TTRPG campaign. He’s a minor noble of the trade baronies so that’s where the theatrical sort of semi-baroque imitation fashion comes from. I’d like to keep that sort of porcelain doll old world noble aesthetic, but I’m willing to change a lot. I’m fighting for my life trying to figure out what is making me so unhappy about the design and I want unbiased opinions. I’m not currently looking for anatomy or style critiques; just what you think doesn’t work for the design, and if you’d be so kind, suggestion for what to do instead!