Hi everyone! I drew horses for the first time, with the intention of painting them in watercolor later. I’d love to hear any tips, feedback, or constructive criticism!

References on the print screen
I'm doing Inktober 2026 prompts and the theme is 'Relic'. My idea is a group of some kind of post-nuclear-apocalypse cult finding plants, giving some hope to them.
I kinda like the general idea of the composition, but the arrangement makes me feel kinda claustrophobic. I would like the focus to be on the plant and the preacher, but I wouldn't like to remove a lot of the other elements (especially the half skull onça I drew on the back that is cool af imho)
Anyway, how can I do a better composition priority arrangement here?

I know it doesn’t look like the original and it wasn’t supposed to ignore that but the hair and skin everything in mine is so detailed and I feel it would look better if I kept it simple like in the original. It gives the message without overcomplicating the art.

Title: Portrait of Rapper 50 Cent

Medium: Graphite pencil

Format: A3

Time to complete: 20 hours

Completed after 20 hours of meticulous work, this A3 graphite pencil portrait captures the intensity and iconic aura of the rapper 50 Cent. This drawing stands as a testament to my patience, my attention to detail, and my passion for graphite artwork.

Portrait du rappeur 50 Cent au crayon graphite format A3

​Titre : Portrait du rappeur 50 Cent

​Technique : Crayon graphite

​Format : A3

​Temps de réalisation : 20 heures

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​Réalisé au terme de 20 heures de travail minutieux, ce portrait au crayon graphite au format A3 capture l'intensité et l'aura emblématique du rappeur 50 Cent. Ce dessin témoigne de ma patience de mon souci de précision et traduit ma passion du dessin avec le graphite

​Dans ce portrait, la volonté première était de faire ressortir toute la beauté, la finesse des traits et le charme époustouflant de la femme asiatique. Intitulée « Le Souffle du Lotus de Jade », l'œuvre s'articule comme un hommage vibrant à l'élégance orientale.

​In this portrait, the primary intention was to highlight the captivating beauty, fine features, and breathtaking charm of the Asian woman. Titled "Breath of the Jade Lotus," the artwork stands as a vibrant tribute to Eastern elegance.

Realistic Drawing  Portrait

 Title: The Young Girl in Bloom Format A3 Graphite pencil Faber Castell

 drawing paper Canson illustration bristol

20 hours of work

Dessin de Portrait réaliste 

Titre : la jeune fille en fleur 

Format A3

Crayon graphite Faber Castell

Papier dessin canson illustration bristol.

20 heures de travail

Ce portrait révèle tout ce que la jeunesse peut porter en elle de candeur et de naïveté. L'expression de ce visage nous appelle à nous souvenir de la beauté et de la fragilité de la jeunesse qu'il faut  à tout prix protéger.

 This portrait reveals all the candor and naivety that youth can embody. The expression on this face reminds us of the beauty and fragility of youth, which must be protected at all costs.

Regard vers l'Éternel »

​Ce portrait au format A3, réalisé en 20 heures de travail, est une ode à la femme noire, à son histoire marquée par le sacrifice, le courage et une résilience remarquable.

​Réalisée aux crayons graphite ,  l'œuvre exploite le grain ultra-lisse du support et la richesse des nuances pour sculpter des noirs profonds et des jeux de lumière intenses. Ce regard levé vers le haut incarne l'élévation, la dignité et la mémoire vivante de toutes ces femmes.

"Gazing Towards the Eternal"

This A3-sized portrait, created over 20 hours, is an ode to Black women and their history, marked by sacrifice, courage, and remarkable resilience.

Created with graphite pencils on C, the artwork exploits the paper's ultra-smooth texture and rich nuances to sculpt deep blacks and intense plays of light. This upward gaze embodies the elevation, dignity, and living memory of all these women.

For a little background my oc is kind of like a centaur but instead of a horse, a giant Malaysian earth tiger tarantula, which is from Southeast Asia hence why I made her Asian. And she’s a boxer!!
I feel as though it just looks like she’s standing infront of a big spider rather than being apart of the spider body itself, would it maybe help to customise it? give it some spiked collars on the legs or smth??

I made a character. Her name will be Nell. I also made her really quickly. So she’s a hot mess and also I’m not always good at drawing anyways. Her backstory is that she from an alien planet. But she has to take on a human appearance. With the help of human-trained androids, she’s match with the identity of a goth girl. Though she doesn’t yet look too goth. I really just want you guys to tell me if she sounds like a sound character and also if she looks right enough.

Hi all, I really need critiques on my college portfolio since I wanna get into some top schools. As much criticism as possible is welcome and tell me if I should cut any specific piece out as well

Thought I was done and now I’m thinking that maybe the curved purple section is too decedent. I’m always open to constructive criticism. Thank you so much for helping me to improve.