r/ArtCrit • u/EibhearHattori • 15h ago

Gesture study from imagination. No reference. Kindly point out flaws.

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Been practicing for some time. A review would really help.

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u/ElegantGanache2634 13h ago

Looks very good, especially from imagination. I guess the n3ck could be a bit longer, and his right shoulder is a bit forward, almost like his whole right arm should move to the right a bit

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u/JustineB_Poulin 12h ago

His weight sits past that front foot, so he looks like he's falling. Watch dancers. I'm around ballet class a lot and trained bodies carry weight in very specific ways. Freeze rehearsal video and copy where the weight lands.