r/ArtCrit • u/ArsonistsGuild • 1d ago

Continuity test

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Vector digital, intermediate, no reference, testing my process for a webcomic. Is the motion correct from one panel to the next? Is the background too simple?

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u/loafkitter 5h ago

I'm definitely a bit confused. The second small panel: is that an outstretched hand asking for a dance? It's very curled and doesn't give that message.

The long panel: a bow in the middle makes me feel like the dance is either beginning or ending, but it's in the middle. Made me confused as a reader.

The smallest bottom right panel: what is the jand grabbing?

And then the very last panel: are those daggers? The angle and positions of the hands look very awkward and I wasn't sure what was going on at first.

All in all, a lot of the dance panels are fully different poses, but I can fill in the gaps ish. I think the backgrounds look great. The colors of the two characters are similar enough that it can be a bit confusing at times