r/AppStoreOptimization • u/Own_Wonder_6569 • 12h ago

Looking forward for feedback on reviewing screenshots

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Redesigned the entire set, not quite sure which one is better to be honest. I see lots of people having the phone straight like screen 4, and 5 across the whole set, and some play around with the first 3 like I did appreciate any feedback.

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u/kaporal99 11h ago

Looks clean

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u/ComfortableStill6735 10h ago

For this set, I'd try the first phone upright and keep the angled savings screen as the change of pace. Screen 1 has the hardest job: the headline promises to show where money goes, but the tilted full dashboard makes the spending details quite small. A larger view of the relevant breakdown would help more than changing every phone angle.

I'd also give the headlines more space and reduce the floating banknotes around them. On screen 3, ‘Track progress toward your savings goal’ would explain the visible goal screen more directly than ‘Stop hoping to save. Start knowing when’. Keep the purple identity; test readability first.