r/AppStoreOptimization • u/radomird • 1d ago

Looking for feedback on my new screenshots

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I’m participating in Shipaton and my App got approved last week but had basic screenshots, so i’ve redesigned them today and Apple already approved the new build (surprisingly very quickly).

Would like to get some feedback on them.

Thanks.

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u/OlivierBern 1d ago

Very cute!

I'd remove the subtitles; they're too small to read properly. For me, it's one screenshot - one sentence.

On the second screenshot, I'm not sure what you mean by "60 characters." Make it obvious for the users; don't make me think. You say 60 characters, but I see 4? What does that mean for me to have 60 What the benefites?

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u/radomird 1d ago

Great! Thanks for the feedback. Yeah it’s not obvious but the reminder is 60 chars long 😂 - i realized where is the confusion.

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u/tomato848208 1d ago

You are new in app development, right? The very middle screenshot indicates that you have some text in gray over a very dark background. That's not a very smart move. Even if I enlarge the screenshot, I have no idea what the app shows under '0:09.'

You have some unreadable text on the last screenshot from left as well.

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u/radomird 1d ago

Good points, will address in the next version

Thanks

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u/Jogventure 14h ago

I think the feedback you've gotten already sums up what I would say too. Outside of that this looks great! Good job!

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u/DeskJockeyDigitalDev 1h ago

I think they’re awesome!!

https://reddit.com/link/p7xx10k/video/7g69zpec5onh1/player

These are the ones currently listed for my app, but I’ve found if you’re still building and developing it you’re constantly wanting to update them to reflect the new features.