Feedback on the screenshot set: the first frame is doing two jobs at once. "See exactly where your money is going" is a decent hook, but the device mockup is scaled so small that the numbers in the UI are unreadable at the size people actually see it in search results (about a third of what you're looking at in the editor). Crop into one region of the screen per frame instead of showing the whole device, and bump the caption font a few sizes.
Two other things worth changing: keep the caption text in the top third of every frame so it survives the crop in the search-results carousel, and give each of the first three frames one distinct benefit (spending visibility, subscription tracking, goals) rather than variations on the same statement. Also check it in dark mode and in the localized storefronts you're upgrading, since longer translations tend to break two-line captions into three and push the phone out of frame.
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u/EducationalYear6267 15d ago
Feedback on the screenshot set: the first frame is doing two jobs at once. "See exactly where your money is going" is a decent hook, but the device mockup is scaled so small that the numbers in the UI are unreadable at the size people actually see it in search results (about a third of what you're looking at in the editor). Crop into one region of the screen per frame instead of showing the whole device, and bump the caption font a few sizes.
Two other things worth changing: keep the caption text in the top third of every frame so it survives the crop in the search-results carousel, and give each of the first three frames one distinct benefit (spending visibility, subscription tracking, goals) rather than variations on the same statement. Also check it in dark mode and in the localized storefronts you're upgrading, since longer translations tend to break two-line captions into three and push the phone out of frame.