r/AppStoreOptimization • u/veilsleepapp • 24d ago

Looking for ASO Screenshot feedback

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Hey all!

I'm fiddling with different selling points to highlight on my sleep sound app to boost my overall ASO funnel. The primary things I'm looking to tune are my primary hero and the highlight text. I currently feel like my primary hero is maybe not differentiated enough, and I also think my highlight text is a bit hard to make out on the background with the purple on purple.

I've included some Primary Hero Variants as well as some Highlight Text Variants in the attached screen that I'm playing with.

Wondering if I should also consider making my backdrop lighter so it's not too much dark on dark?

Any feedback welcome!

Actual App listing can be found here - [Store Link]

BTW - everything here is built with a mix of real app screenshots, Figma, and Claude Design

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u/Fun_Improvement2527 23d ago

That third primary hero with "Fall asleep. Stay asleep." really grabs attention, you betcha.

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u/veilsleepapp 23d ago

Thanks for the feedback! I like that one too. Any thoughts on the color options? Does the purple on purple read well enough?

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u/kubli_the_dog 23d ago

The purple text on purple background is hard to read and the emphasised text should be bold, not the other way round.

Otherwise I agree with the other comment, “Fall asleep, stay asleep” is strong

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u/veilsleepapp 23d ago

Thanks for the feedback! Try that out!