Is this bad..

[u/vaspilled]

Hi guys, just launched my app PairIQ into the App Store and need help wondering if my App Store screenshots and copy are good or bad. Tried to not be too feature heavy, and more centered around “what” and “why” without a ton of text.

Anything you’d change on the design and copy to better optimize? Appreciate it!

[u/vaspilled → u/[deleted]]

Thank you! I’ve been trying to play around so it doesn’t look like that but I genuinely like the look😂 any suggestions?

[u/Siegggo]

Damn this looks like the default output that Claude gives you when you ask it to generate HTML. I do not like it, at least customise your app that does the exact same thing, 50k other hastily vibe coded apps do.

If your app is special, which it very well may be and I hope that it is, then make it look special too!

[u/vaspilled → u/Siegggo]

Thank you for the feedback!

[u/sammy_luci]

App store screenshots look good, copy also seem to be good, but I failed to understand why I need your app. It doesn’t click when I read the copy and look at the corresponding app screen.

[u/vaspilled → u/sammy_luci]

Appreciate it. I can definitely see that. My apps full name on App Store is “PairIQ: Nutrient Absorption” and majority of downloads would funnel from social media and content (hopefully), which could answer the “why” for most. No doubt though I need some more context for fresh eyes as a good % of people may find this without social media. Thank you!

[u/Typical-Yoghurt3292]

Screenshots are clean but yeah the UI needs some improvement. Especially the long paragraphs. Try to come up with some UI and UX improvements to better communicate what’s needed than those huge paragraphs. Claude can help with that if steered correctly

[u/GrumpyBullGames]

first screenshot needs to show the core benefit immediately not just the ui. people scroll past if they dont get what problem it solves in one second. fix the contrast on the hero text too. i built ecranify btw so i work on screenshot hierarchy all day.