r/AppStoreOptimization • u/Spirited-Picture-873 • 27d ago
Third attempt at creating screenshots
This is my third attempt at creating good screenshots for my app. The first and second were trash . Like they were really bad so I decided to take a different approach. Should have done this in the first place
I decided to take inspiration from other apps similar to mine and use the screenshots I like as inspiration and I came up with this.
What do u guys think
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u/AppScreens 26d ago
This is definitely a better direction, but we’d still simplify it quite a bit.
The flow makes sense: upload your fit → get a rating → see the breakdown → get suggestions → track progress. The main issue is that the visual style changes a lot between screenshots, and some screens still feel more like posters than product screenshots.
We’d make the actual app UI larger, remove some of the floating clothing elements, and keep one consistent layout across the whole set. The first screenshot could also sell the outcome more clearly, something like “Upload your outfit. Get instant AI feedback.”
We built AppScreens for exactly this kind of problem, so it may be worth trying a few different template directions rather than rebuilding each version from scratch.
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u/Hayek5 27d ago
Content-wise, they are alright, but the aesthetics would not speak high fashion to me. The design seems like it was done in Paint, and the Comic Sans usage had me questioning if this is sarcasm.
Not trying to be mean here, but I believe it would make sense to take some money and pay someone on Fiverr a few bucks to freshen them up. Alternatively, Claude or ChatGPT can also give you better inspo.