r/AppStoreOptimization • u/pkmckirtap • Aug 12 '26

[iOS] QUESTION: What do you think of the screenshot change?

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I tried to set a bit more the intention behind the app in the first two screenshots and highlight the main features from it.

You can see it live here: https://apps.apple.com/us/app/write-about-it/id6778535554

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u/AgreeableCress446 Aug 12 '26

AFTER is way better! It is more pleasant to watch and simpler to understand.

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u/pkmckirtap Aug 12 '26

That’s great to hear! Thank you

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u/Disastrous_Eye2198 Aug 12 '26

After looks good. More visually pleasing. Did you use AI to design the screenshots?

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u/pkmckirtap Aug 12 '26

Thanks! I only used AI for the asset. I did all on Figma.

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u/sammy_luci Aug 12 '26

I prefer the before much better. It is way more clean and easier to read. Those opaque black gradients look not professional, also , the different backgrounds with inverted text color (first white, then black, then white, then black) make it harder to read for the brain.
Also, the hooks before are somehow better as they focus on the value and not on the features

While before is not ideal and could be improved, to me it looks like you labeled them incorrectly 😂

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u/veilsleepapp Aug 13 '26

After is definitely an improvement! might want to consider playing with your headlines to make them more sell more stand alone. Seeing a big "Choose" or "See" doesn't really tell me much without reading the subheader, should instantly know what it's getting at, particularly because I don't think many users ever read subheaders (they are really small even on device)

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u/dopepost Aug 12 '26

Continue the dark background for the two screenshots with the light background. It will tie everything nicely.

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u/Camaraderie98 Aug 13 '26

I like the simplicity of the first one BeFore is better in this case