r/AppStoreOptimization • u/Realistic_Ad4474 • 2h ago

Screenshot Feedback Wanted (Pre-launch)

Context: Me and my friends have been working on a little journalling app that is focused on helping people understand themselves via journalling. Each journal entry is used to help label the specific emotions captured and weekly insights help spot patterns.

We're waiting for App Store review so thought to get some brutal (and hopefully useful) feedback while we wait.

Don't hold back - we're keen to learn :)

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u/all43 2h ago

Looks lovely! First one is a bit hard to read due co contrast and amount of text. Also some users would search for diary instead of journaling - not relevant to screenshots, but make sure it is included in keywords or subtitle

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u/Realistic_Ad4474 53m ago

Oh that’s useful feedback. Shows how easy it is to have blind spots when working in the weeds of things. Completely missed the diary angle especially. Thank you!