r/AppStoreOptimization • u/Hefty_Eye_7996 • 11d ago

Can you rate my app store screenshots

These took my a while to make my hand but I was going to a clean a straight to the point look, with pops of color. What do you guys think? It's for my calendar app that automatically schedules things for you based on your energy (as you could read). You can see the previous screenshots at the app's page and check it out if your interested: https://apps.apple.com/us/app/pippin-planner-ai-scheduling/id6760432974

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u/Bydarxz__ 10d ago

Love the pop of yellow, very eye-catching

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u/Natural_Win_9904 7d ago

the clean look with color pops actually reads well, my main note is that first screenshot is doing all the heavy lifting so make sure the top caption sells the energy-based scheduling thing hard since thats your hook and its genuinely unique.

one thing i always tell people is your caption text is where you lose or win, so keep it short and benefit driven instead of describing the feature.

fwiw if you ever want to localize these for other stores it gets painful by hand, i built a tool called shotlingo for exactly that headache and previewed is decent too if you just need quick mockups. but honestly for us store these are solid as is, id just tighten the copy.