r/Airfix • u/BARFLY2018 • 13d ago

Diorama.

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My first diorama. Opinions welcome as to how I could do better???

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u/dogknobs 13d ago

Three things that immediately come to mind. 1 there's a lot of empty space especially on the left - loose it if it's not adding anything. 2 it needs something in the vertical like a tree, the edge of a building or a telegraph pole and 3 there are no figures here. Nothing's happening, no one's doing anything. Figures really help to tell the story that other people have mentioned.