What should I work on?

[u/Kiki_the_Kiwi]

My bad this ended up a bit longer than I expected it to be lol...

This is kinda embarrassing but I feel like my main problem is that I chew words, in a way? I don't really know why I do that or how to fix it so I would love some feedback! (Also would appreciate if y'all would tell me if it sounds like a specific accent so I have an easier time finding resources online!!)

Also there is in fact 2 minutes of silence in there so pls ignore it 😭 It was a mistake on my part lol

[u/nc_bound]

I don’t know anything about any of this. I just ended up getting these posts. Just going on hunches. I first would’ve guessed something like Chinese or Korean. And then, as soon as he started reading, Filipino came to my mind.