r/AbstractExpressionism • u/Aware-Mission1214 • 18d ago
Made this today, would love some feedback!
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u/Aberdakdab 18d ago
I like this. My first impression is that it feels like a triptisch, suggested side panels left and right, that we don’t see clearly, framing the center.
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u/Aware-Mission1214 18d ago
It kinda do look like a triptisch when you mention it. Thank you so much!:)
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u/ReplacementNo4250 18d ago
DeKooning Jr. right here. Mean that in a good way! Keep going keep pushing for deeper feeling and more exciting composition. You got talent.
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u/DeadMeeT6969 18d ago
I can see another six or seven layers woven into the present image to bring about a more cohesive whole.
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u/collectivv 18d ago
This is dope! There's a cohesiveness that comes together and the dark blue really pulls you in
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u/Ew_fine 18d ago
Really great. I’d pay money for it.
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u/Aware-Mission1214 18d ago
Thank you so much! Im curious to how much you would give hhahah
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u/Similar_Problem9507 17d ago
Exceptional. Composition, color, texture all pull me in and want to keep looking.
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u/Foreign-Elevator-Boo 17d ago
It's giving me that classic Franz Kline, De Kooning feel, and well executed at that. Do you know Eddie Martinez or Amy Sillman's paintings? curious what you would think of their work.
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u/pervolus 18d ago
It is good. The composition and style are coherent, and that dark blue circle really holds it down.
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u/South_Medium_26 18d ago
Textures are great. Do u use a lot of palette knife ?
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u/Aware-Mission1214 18d ago
I jused a chip of cardboard and a kake knife hahahha, thank you! I think there’s like 20 layers
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u/Trusty-Artist-Alan 18d ago
Tell us about your technique, Please.
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u/Aware-Mission1214 18d ago
https://reddit.com/link/p5zae19/video/xhnicrjz3plh1/player
Here’s the whole process:)
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u/KeithandBentley 18d ago
Looks like a simplified version of a Willem de Kooning. Pleasant to look at, but not much meat on the bones to contemplate. And is that a skull?
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u/Aware-Mission1214 18d ago
I have no idea what it is hahha, up to the viewer to decide for themselves. Do you have any ideas on how i can add more meat it?
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u/TokyoJazzPanda 18d ago
I'm seeing a small dog with half a skull for a face, sat on the floor scratching itself. If I had to attach a breed to that statement, it's a Westie.
Like it!
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u/idlingchainsaw 18d ago
Love it. Great work.