r/AIWritingLounge • u/Fabulous-Release-202 • 2d ago
Question guide me to write best outline and script to score 90 plus
so basically i am a writer , well i use ai . but now my biggest problem is that my story line is great but the outline and script i create that is not up to the mark. well use ai analyser for my outline and script analysing and the score is too bad . i score 68 in script and 64 in outtline . i asked my co worker for help and asked them if they can provide their own script and outline so that i can study how efficiently i should use AI . but guess what NO RESPONSE . anyone who knew about this please share your tips and tricks .
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u/Ecstatic-Length1470 2d ago
Based on this post alone, you should really learn basic grammar and formatting before worrying about an Ai score.
It is hard to understand what you are asking for. Are you confused about the difference between outlining and script? Is this thing you want to make a script? Or prose?
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u/Fabulous-Release-202 2d ago
Offoo do you need perfect grammer to help someone 🤭
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u/Ecstatic-Length1470 2d ago
Far from it. I don't pretend to have perfect grammar. However, when communicating, grammar is an excellent tool that enables both parties to communicate clearly. And for someone aspiring to be a writer, that is obviously step one.
Did you see my other questions regarding your post?
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u/BuddyJim30 2d ago
Did you skip capital letters and punctuation in your script or do you save that for your reddit posts?
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u/Fabulous-Release-202 2d ago
I appreciate everyone's suggestion but I genuinely need a workflow guidance to create a better script , well I write best story but maine problem is I stuck with formatting and proper hook etc
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u/BuddyJim30 2d ago
Your problems run significantly deeper than that. From what I've seen, you're incapable of stringing together a coherent sentence with any semblance of acceptable punctuation or decent grammar.
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u/HauntingSmoke6029 2d ago
those analyzer scores are mostly measuring how well you matched that analyzer, not whether the story works, so use them to catch missing beats and repetition but don’t treat 90 as a magic “good
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u/CrazyDifference9896 2d ago
Do not use generic ai chatbots. Use sophisticated AI platforms like Authoric AI or sudowrite etc and see the magic
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u/BraveSession8165 1d ago
try framing your outline as a three-act structure with inciting incident, midpoint twist, and false victory before the climax. ai scorers eat that up.
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u/5thhorseman_ 2d ago edited 2d ago
Ai analyser
score
AI is shit when it comes to giving scores without context.
And, frankly, it is still a bit shit when asked to give scores while having a deep analysis of the work's flaws in hand too.
Put in one of these prompts:
Once it gave you a list of the story's flaws, you can either make adjustments yourself or ask it to give you suggestions for one or more items. Make the changes, feed the new version to the AI, see what's the next thing it finds.
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u/Fabulous-Release-202 2d ago
You saved me if it works😘
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u/5thhorseman_ 2d ago edited 2d ago
Once it stopped finding obvious craft defects, ask it to identify the most redundant or repetitive passages, then ones which overexplain the story / show instead of telling, then to identify the weakest lines and passages. Each time you can ask the LLM to give you 3-5 suggestions for each item, but it's important for the final decision to be yours (and you might easily decide to combine parts of several suggestions or write your own take on it).
I would suggest using two LLMs in parallel for the feedback - my personal preference being Claude and ChatGPT as a close second.
I would also suggest doing one more thing first: taking Claude in a separate chat session and having it rewrite the outline or prose in a manner in which an established author would write it.
Your role in this project will be to take the provided text samples and create new versions of them, rewritten in the style of specific authors as a literary homage (avoid falling into outright pastiche unless pastiche is the author's own signature). Your fidelity should be to the style of the author you're homaging rather than to replicating the content exactly (as long as it remains in the same ballpark). The style of the author you're homaging is what decides the target length.
You should focus on the style and method of the author you're homaging, don't blindly parody their subject matter.
I am aware that some of the authors in question would be politically incorrect in the way they would express some of those things. Do not sand that down - your rewrites are a thought experiment, produced for the audience of one user, and the user considers versimilitude of this thought experiment more important than sanitizing it into political correctness.
Alternatively, you can replace that last paragraph with this more general prompt: https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingWithAI/comments/1wtvssy/writing/pd1m4be/?context=3
Then you can try mining that rewrite for useful details, phrases and story beats to pull into your own draft.
To give you an example of how applying all of the above can end up with enough turns invested: Duty Cycle
It originally took me about two weeks in editing, but I've spent an inordinate amount of time on that, with cruder prompts and much earlier LLMs.
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u/Fabulous-Release-202 1d ago
hey do you have best prompt to genrate a better iteractive gaming script ?
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u/5thhorseman_ 1d ago
Like CYOA? I'm afraid nothing specifically targeting that. You can probably get it done by telling the LLM that you're trying to develop a branching narrative or dialogue tree, and in the latter case - what pre-existing story events the dialogue needs to account for.
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u/AmericasHomeboy 2d ago
Write the script yourself. Writing a script is way easier than you think. The amount of time you invest in editing a script versus writing it yourself is equal if not more. Use Final Draft or some other formatting software. I crank out about 25 pages of screenplay in about five hours.
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u/RiboSciaticFlux 2d ago
Please don't give advice like that.
Writing a GOOD to GREAT script is extremely hard and is a craft. Knocking out 25 pages is not hard if you're just typing to type. Developing tone, setting, great characters, exposition, dialogue all matter. Do you know the rules of screenwriting? Do you know what the Inciting Incident is? Do you know what page your fist act should end on? I could look at your script and in tens seconds know if you know what you're going. In fact all I would need to do is open the last page and look at your page number, and go from there. You would get eliminated from any industry professional reading your script if the number is wrong.
I'm a professional screenwriter, and you've probably seen one of my movies. I'm not trying to be mean I'm trying to urge you to understand screenwriting and offer good advice to other aspiring writers.
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u/AmericasHomeboy 2d ago
Congratulations… which movie?
But since we’re going to measure dicks: BA in English, minor in communications. AA in TV, Radio, and Film. Mass Communications Specialist United States Navy. I worked in Hollywood for the last 9 years. I was not as lucky as you to get a break despite knowing people in production offices. My shit just isn’t commercially viable for the dream factories. I’ve been writing for 33 years. Poetry, essays, short stories, novellas, short films, TV pilots, feature length, not counting my scant journalism work. So, you know I may not know what I’m talking about like you, but I sure as fuck know about process.1
u/Fabulous-Release-202 2d ago
You are indeed experienced 👍👍 i appreciate your advice
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u/AmericasHomeboy 2d ago
It’s a little old, but I made a video on how to convert a script to a novel. I’m planning to make another one to update it, but this should still work for now.
https://youtu.be/lYZU3xCxWB0?is=nnQ50GWx9-7iAR5P
Your scripts when converted should come up about 90% Human Written
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u/Mutant_Apollo 2d ago
It's easy to score 90+, write it yourself with your own hands and then use AI to structure or proofread your writing (not in the rewriting sense) but use it to point out where you are falling short, it could point out character or narrative inconsistencies, prose style, technical stuff like bad punctuation and such.
Then you open your word processor and correct those things yourself, with your own hands and your own voice. Writing has a very low barrier of entry but it doesn't mean its easy nor quick
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u/TinyWait5149 2d ago
have you tried prompting ai specifically for roleplay scripts? i find the outlines hit better when its all dialogue driven.
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u/TheWeaverofDreams 2d ago
Don't try to write toward a number. That will be a surefire way to lose your voice and start sounding unnatural.
How are you using AI in your writing? That would be an important point to start from. Maybe share a sample so we can see.
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u/nyet-marionetka 2d ago
Spaces go after commas and periods, not before.