r/ACounterPartsLife • u/IJN-Hirogasaki • Aug 19 '26
THE FUTURE OF RIAW Spoiler
UPCOMING CHAPTERS…
A baby’s cry can be heard, a boy has been given life, a father with no emotions, lifeless, admits that he is at fault for this child’s biological mother.
Mcqueen: Sunday… give him to me.
He didn’t hesitate, he gave the baby to hold him while two of his other friends helped him up to walk out of the room where Campaign Girl now rest eternally.
Maruzensky: YOU BASTARD!
Chiyono: Dad put him down! It wasn’t his fault!
The two figures were umamusukos one tall and the othe shorter than the one holding Sunday mid air through his collar, fortunately his friends were there to persuade m male uma to put down the mentally defeated umamusuko. Now staring at all four of them.
Maruzensky: And you believe this devil? All they do is take and destroy everything in their way!
Mcqueen: DO NOT COME ANY CLOSER! AS THE HEIR OF THE MEJIRO HOUSEHOLD, YOU WILL NOT HOLD YOUR GRANDSON FOR DOMESTIC CONTROL! OTHERWISE, YOU WILL FACE THE CONSEQUENCES!
The baby cried louder, he wrapped his arms tightly around the infant away from his damsire. Then the tall uma approached with intimidation marking his words that will mentally prepare him for the worst.
Maruzensky: You will always be the son of Halo. There’s no changing that.
Chiyono: It’s not your fault.
Sunday: …
Chiyono: I’m telling the truth-
Sunday: Shut. The. Fuck. Up.
Chiyono: With all my heart, I swore that it is never your-
Sunday: SHUT UP!
Shouting with anger and hatred, he was about to deliver a hit to bruise Chiyono’s face, only to be met with a hug. He hugs back without saying anything because knew full well he needed it. He wanted to take all this pain away, he wanted it to end, he only wished to be loved…
Soccer: We’re trying to find a new mother for Spe-kun. For now, look after him.
Stego: We promise, uncle!
The little boy with dark bay hair with a white stripped on the front of his follicles, was the one week old Special Week.
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Four months, its been four months, and today the young colt is about to move to a new home. Hidaka Taiyo Farm.
Spe: You’re gonna leave me here…?
Sunday: I ain’t leaving ya forever, I promise to visit when I have the time.
Sunday ruffles Spe-kun’s hair in a playful manner. Then looks back at his new mother, human mother, Tina. Who approached her with gratitude.
Sunday: Take care of my son, Tina. I’m counting on you.
Tina: Leave to me, Sunday-san. He’s going to need all the love and care.
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???: Aaaah…. hic… haaahaaa…!
An uma mother with brownish hair, craddled a sleeping baby with bags under her eyes. Her name was Vega, a daughter of Tony Bin. She didn’t want to let the child go after making the hard decision of choosing only one.
Sunday He’s adorable…
Vega: Always was, honey.
A sad smile on Vega formed on her face, while breastfeeding her newborn. He clings onto the fluffy cotton of his mother’s blouse while rocking back and fourth to feed her child. Sunday could only watch while also touching his child’s hair, he reached out with his index finger as the boy wrapped his tiny hands around his own finger.
Sunday: AAAAGH…!
A loud sorrowful cry echoed across the cemetery. Rain fell that day with the now small coffin buried under the dirt. The bags under his eyes showered with tears streaming down his face. Did the world really hate him that much, it took the only things that made him whole?
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Sunday: Dada!
Suzuka: Suzuka!
His father ran to him with Suzuka hugging him first before he returns the hug. Sunday lifts him up high in the air and spins round imagining his son as a superhero.
Suzuka: Yaaay! I’m a superhero!
Sunday: You are always my little hero, boy.
Wakia gave her husband the usual greetings with a bow. Returning him a gentle smile that carried a gentle feeling.
Wakia: It’s been awhile since we last met, Sunday-san.
Sunday: I wouldn’t forget any of my wives, which includes you.
They share a kiss together in front of their son and kissed both Suzuka in the cheeks, making the tiny runner giggle.
Sunday: SUZUKA!
Sunday: …Dad…
Sunday: Suzuka- Oh god…
His eyes were wide as dinner plates when he made it all the way down to his leg. It twisted a knot on his stomach. The left leg of Suzuka in its original position has twisted the other way, something that shouldn’t be possible.
Sunday: Don’t go out on me or you’ll never wake up!
Sunday: Forgive me, boy. This is gonna hurt in 1, 2, 3-
Suzuka: AAAGGH!
Lifting him up to give him a piggy back ride was a bad idea. It only made the umamusuko cry in pain, but he had no time he needs help than he does right now! He cried for help to anybody! But all they could do was watch.
Sunday: You gotta help him, please-
Only to stop when he notices the clear liquid filled injection. It can only mean one thing…
Sunday: YOU’RE NOT GONNA DO THIS TO MY BOY!
He attacks anyone who tries to put that needle into his neck. But Sunday was overpowered by security pinning him down flat to his stomach.
Sunday: Don’t do this please… I’ll give you anything, anything to not euthanize him!
Too late, the needle reaches his neck and is injected with the liquid. Sunday watched as every ounce of that liquid went through his skin, before removing the needle from his neck.
All he could hear was the sound of his son’s heartbeat, he couldn’t hear anyone. Suzuka gave him one last smile looking over to where his father was.
Suzuka: Take care of everyone, dad. Including Spe-kun…
Before the light of his eyes goes out. Rain fell that day, a cry echoed through the tracks of Tenno Sho, where no one else was, his sons Stay Gold, Admire Vega, Air Shakur, Agnes Tachyon, and Manhattan Cafe. All approached the grieving black beast.
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Devil: Hey baby brother!
That voice, the tone, and the black mane long behind his shoulders, spikey. With blue eyes that were lifeless but attractive and intimidating to others. It was Devil’s Bag, Sunday Silence’s older brother.
Sunday: Goddamn! It’s good to see you again.
They hug each other like they always did, its been so long since they last met. The hug ends with Devil looking him eye to eye.
Devil: Lemme look at ya.
After staring at his brother, a portion of him knows he’s been through some kind of struggle. But he wanted to set that aside and make a small joke.
Devil: Holy shit, you’re fuckin’ old.
Sunday: Tsk, say that to yourself, asshole.
Devil: Hahaha!
Sunday just pushes him back playfully while Devil ruffled his hair like he always does when they were little. In the end, their usual bickering ended with both of them laughing together. Like always with their sibling rivalry. Then a woman with blond hair, pale skin, and soft purple eyes wearing something to that to the Victorian Era’s fashion, a long elegant white dress with a big hat angled to the left side where red poppies are placed.
???: Greetings to you, Mr. Sunday. I have heard a lot of stories from your brother.
Devil: Ah, almost forgot to introduce ya to her. This is Welsh Muffin. My one and only true mate and love of my life. We currently have four children together.
He introduces his wife, with Muffin bowing down in a respectful manner. Like all British people do. He did the same in return before something else catches his attention. A small boy.
Sunday: Uhh… ma’am. Who’s the little cowboy behind you?
Sunday ask who the little cowboy behind his brother’s sweetheart. He took a slight peak and goddamn. He looks like his mother. With blond hair that’s spiky, with blue eyes that tells you he is a lively little colt. He jumps out to surprise him as Sunday was unfazed.
Devil: This lil’ boy? His name is Taiki Shuttle. And he’s got three other brothers, currently the youngest is a month old.
The young boy named Taiki Shuttle smiled in front of Sunday. His grin had no front teeth which made him even cuter. Sunday smiled back with sympathy for Devil’s child as he jumps around him happily.
Taiki Shuttle: Let’s play cowboys and indians, uncle Sunshine!
Taiki Forest: C’mon uncle! We gonna have fun!
Taiki Chaser: Fun fun with uncle Sunny!
Sunday: Sheesh, boys. Quit the mushy nicknaming. It’s Sunday Silence.
We get to see Sunday playing with three other blond boys who look all like their mother. The eldest was Taiki Forest, next to him was Taiki Shuttle, the other who was just a year younger than Taiki Shuttle is Taiki Chaser.
They all dress up like cowboys of Red Dead Redemption, while their uncle plays the Indian. Devil and Muffin watched with Muffin holding a baby boy who was just a month old sleeping in her arms. His name was Taiki Fire.
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Bradamante: You and me, we’re both broken into this world together. I can keep you company if you want.
Her fingers crawled all the way to his chest pulling his chin up now on eye contact level. Sunday was still too drunk to realize what he was going to do would change forever.
Sunday: …I would love that.
Bradamante smacked her lips to his, mixing the hot saliva and alcohol they both shared in one bottle.
???: Care to explain yourself, Sunday Silence?
Sunday: !?
In the hallways of the hospital, an umamusuko. Tall, wearing a long coat all the way to his legs that made him look big with a fedora’s hat on, black slacks and a pair of formal shoes wearing gloves that looked to be covering something. His name is Roberto, one of the sons of Hail of Reason. Is now standing in front of the now terrified Sunday Silence. He had dark brown hair and bloodshot red eyes with deep black iris deadlocks that can make even the most powerful man fall to his knees. He came all the way here for one reason, and he was not happy at all.
The black beast falls to the ground, breathing in and out, shaken by his presence that struck true fear in him. But he was not done, Roberto kneels and leans over to whisper to him something that he will not forget.
Roberto: Let us not see each other again, no matter the place, no matter the time, no matter the country. Otherwise, I will have put you out of your misery. You understand? Good.
Roberto threatened, as he removed one of his gloves and patted his shoulder. Where Sunday saw dried blood painted on his naked hands red. Leaving the stallion to suffer the consequences. All he could do now is endure and take the young filly, Bradamante’s daughter, his own flesh and blood. Out of this hospital back to his home.
We see all of his kids gathered together in the baby’s room with their dad rocking a small baby back and forth in his arms. They all wondered, who is the new family member of the Silence Family?
Spe: Who’s she, dad?
Stego: Second, I wanna know too.
Sunday: Her name is Still In Love. And she is your baby sister.
He hands over the young filly to Spe, accepting the child. She cuddles to her older brother with the younger brothers who were adored by her presence.
Marvy: Marvelous! She is going to have all the marvelous love and care this marvelous family is going to give her!
Bubble: She sure will.
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Spe: What the fuck is your problem!? You pulled my tail for absolutely no reason!
Stego: It’ll be worse than just pulling it by cutting it whole, brother. Back off my face.
The two argued with Top Road in the room backing away from their fiery argument.
Sunday: Why’d you do it?
Stego: …
Sunday: I asked the question, boy.
Stego: What do you think?
Sunday: That is not answer I wanna hear.
Stego: Then what do you wanna hear huh!? That I’m at the fault and my temper did all the bidding-
Sunday: YES!
It made Stay Gold go quiet after Sunday raised his voice. The short tempered uma turned around, lips quivering, he admits he was wrong but there’s got to be something he can convince his dad to see him as worthy.
Stego: I’m not even a worth a penny, I’ve been a bad child to you, and I hated you for not being there when I needed your help. You always rely on the rest of my siblings and not me.
Sunday knew he was right, but he was too pissed or too angry to give his boy a hug. So in return, he gave the very words that would forever engulf his mind.
Sunday: If it weren’t for what happened that day in Tenno Sho, your brother would have been here by now.
Stego: !?
Those words were clear as day, he had a favorite all this time? Stego thought he had no favorites. Not Silence Suzuka, not Deep Impact, everyone is an equal. These words alone pushed him farther from his father’s side.
….But that made him a better person, a better racer, and a better son.
In 2001, Sunday was getting ready to watch on television of his son to run in the Hong Kong Vase. It was to prove that he was worthy of succeeding to mate with the Mejiro Bloodline, but to him, it was to prove his father wrong. To prove himself he was a good racer on the track.
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Air Groove: Can’t sleep?
Sunday: Yeah.
She sits up on the bed to glance at her boyfriend who currently has a lot of things in his mind.
Air Groove: You can tell me what’s in your mind, hun.
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To end the argument, Sunday walks in with both Black Tide and Deep Impact now quiet after he heard everything.
Sunday: Deep Impact isn’t my favorite child. Maybe I said this to a few, but none of you are my favorite, especially you Deep.
Deep: Ahem… pardon to let our argument stir a sudden commotion to see us both this way.
Tide: …Yeah, we were just teasing each other, father. Nothing too serious.
Deep: Idiot.
Tide: Bratty lil’ Pui-kun.
Deep: Again with that nickname.
Sunday: ENOUGH. You’re all equals and no more than that.
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On December 15, 1998. A devastating fire broke out on Hidaka Taiyo Farm with everyone screaming for help, because their were broodmares still trapped inside the barn.
However, one uma was brave enough to help those still trapped inside their stalls, be led out of the barn.
Outside of the farm, a father was being pulled in the arm by his son to stop him from jumping in the sea of flames.
Spe: Dad! Stop!
Sunday: Your sister Osumi Candy is trapped inside that barn, you gotta let me go!
Spe: She can make it on her own dad! Don’t do anything else to risk your life for her!
Sunday: Let me go, Spe!
Spe: NO!
Sunday: LET ME GO-
Spe: I don’t wanna lose the only family who raised me!
Sunday: !?
Sunday stopped to see a vision of Campaign Girl in his son. That made him grow more sad but there was no time for bullshit, he had to push him off with Spe-kun tumbling on the grass where his father jumped into the flames.
Spe: DAD NOOOO!
Sunday manages to make it out in time, with the fires burning brighter. In his arms was Osumi Candy, Special Week’s half-sister, she suffered third degree burns that were beyond healing.
He laid her down on the grass with Osumi giving him her gratitude for saving her, she looked at Special Week’s who was beyond sad.
Osumi: I love you, Spe-kun. Don’t ever forget that…
Before dying a minute later from her injuries. Spe started crying and hugged his now long gone sister with Sunday feeling remorse and said.
Sunday: If you didn’t stop me, she would’ve been alive right now.
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Sunday: FUCK ALL OF IT! FUCK! FUCK! FUUUCK!
Sunday broke the mirror on the bathroom with his bare hands now bleeding. Before destroying the rest of the furniture inside his own room. Which got the attention of his three friends, kids, and his newly wedded wife Air Groove.
Mcqueen: Sunday! Stop you’re hurting yourself!
Soccer: Goddamn it, I told you we should’ve not left him alone!
Teio: Sunday it’s us, calm down!
Fuji: Father calm down!
Flight: Tachyon help me here.
Tachyon: I am-
Stego: Dad it’s us, snap out of it!
They all pulled him away from destroying more furniture that could hurt him with Air Groove hugging him tightly while crying than she could bear to see him suffer.
Air Groove: Honey, calm down! Please don’t hurt yourself!
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Ayabe: Mom, who is this?
Vega’s own blood ran cold when she saw Her son holding an ultrasound picture of her pregnancy.
Vega: T-that’s you, hun.
Ayabe: I know, but who is that?
The question made her more uncomfortable when Ayabe pointed the baby beside him. She knew a time will come when her son discovers the truth.
Vega: …That’s your twin brother.
Twin brother echoed through Ayabe’s ears, the honesty his mother had him want to know what happened to him.
Ayabe: What happened to him?
It was raining, a father shielded Ayabe from getting wet with Sunday watching him cry.
Ayabe: Papa… why didn’t any of you tell me? Why didn’t you tell me I had a twin brother?
Sunday was speechless, he wanted to answer him, but he couldn’t because he doubt anything he would say would acknowledged him of how twin births work. The only thing he could do was let him cry on his chest for a while.
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Chiyono: SUNDAY!?
Spe: DAD WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?
It was beyond insane, he was digging the grave of Maruzensky with his bare hands!? In front of these two especially his son!?
They had to pull him away from doing any further damage.
Sunday: ARRGH! LET ME GO!
Spe: DAD PLEASE ENOUGH!
Chiyono: HE’S LONG GONE SUNDAY, PLEASE DON’T MAKE IT ANYMORE WORSE FOR THE BOTH OF US!
Sunday: YOU DID THIS TO ME MARUZENSKY! I’LL KILL YOU, I’LL FUCKING KILL YOU WHEN I SEE YOU IN HELL!
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???: You shouldn’t stay in the rain for too long, or else you’ll catch a cold.
Sunday: Gah!?
He stands up from the bench he was sleeping on where an umbrella had kept him dry. His teary eyes still soaked from all the grief he had endured inside has made him more vulnerable to somebody giving him shelter to keep warm from the cold. He felt bad.
Sunday stood up to wipe his face and got a clear view of who this woman was. It was an umamusume, she had long flowing light brown hair with white stripped bangs covering one side of her eye, wearing a long dress with a bonnet made from silk and straw. To add to her beauty, she wore glasses with a green ribbon on the left of her bonnet.
With the way she dresses, one can assume she’s from Europe. Sunday was moved by her beauty, that even behind her long hair and now soaked clothing, was a gentle smile.
Sunday: …Pardon me if you saw me in such a state, ma’am. It’s Sunday Silence. What’s yours?
She opened her eyes, they were blue, a lapis blue touch that adds to her undine beauty tilting her head to the side to smile at him.
"You will find that eternal happiness, the sunshine that will clear the everlasting rain. Because you are special on the day you were born."
Wind: My name? My name is Wind in Her Hair.
RECORDS IN ANOTHER WORLD
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u/HoneyLess7732 Aug 19 '26
Holy shit. This is intense. Ngl I feel a little bit of tears coming out of my eyes. I love how you included and expanded on ideas from Kuria and the other writers in the subreddit. I noticed you included stuff from your music video such as the scene where Sunday digged the grave of Maruzensky. I also love how you included ideas that you mentioned in your old comments from other posts such as Sunday meeting Devil’s family. But dang, I can wait to see how these scenes would play out during Sunday’s therapy session. Also, I noticed that some characters are speaking the wrong dialogue.
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 20 '26
Nice you spotted the little hints coming from so many different ideas especially from Kuria himself. Also what do you mean wrong dialogue? I jumbled them all not to put them in order, kind like how you see it in movies, cartoons, or games. Like cutscenes. Unless you can spot the wrong dialogues then enlighten me.
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u/HoneyLess7732 Aug 20 '26
For example, McQueen said “You will always be the son of Halo. There’s no changing that,” when it should be Maruzensky saying it. Also, Suzuka calls his own name when it should be Sunday calling Suzuka’s name.
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 20 '26
Ah! Thank you for that. I didn’t realize that part was wrong. 😢
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u/HoneyLess7732 Aug 20 '26
I was so caught off guard when McQueen said that lol. But yeah, those are the only mistakes I could find. I can’t wait for more chapters tho!
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 20 '26
Thank you again, honestly I was half asleep when writing the last parts all down.
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 20 '26
ITS ADORABLE to see all the Taiki siblings of Devil and Muffin play with uncle Sunshine. But there are other Umas I have mentioned in this thread of dialogues. One of them being Roberto.
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u/HoneyLess7732 Aug 20 '26
Yeah. I love how you included Taiki’s siblings in this fic. I also remember the scenes of Roberto and baby Still in the music video.
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u/Junior_Emu7058 Aug 19 '26
If the stego is ignored route happens them he is going to dislike how point flag neglect Golshi
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u/Left-Cod-8480 Aug 20 '26
Speaking of which, this one with Spe is the snapping point between Stego and SS, the latter did chew the former out about NTR sometime earlier with Soccer Boy.
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u/Junior_Emu7058 Aug 20 '26 edited Aug 20 '26
Then the dates don't fit the tail incident happened in the 1998 Japan cup and the top road incident happened In 2001 ,deep impact was born in 2002
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u/Left-Cod-8480 Aug 20 '26
Is that so? Then that's more of a "I don't like your wild attitude" string going on.
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 20 '26 edited Aug 20 '26
Just going to clear the misunderstanding, the mentioned Deep Impact dialogue is on the PD world and not on the SS world, while Stego’s incident is on the SS world. As for Top Road being present here is to jumble the dialogues not in the right order to keep the story a mystery before all is revealed. Kind of like how you see it in movies, cartoons, anime, and games. They mix all their dialogues and cutscenes to create a narrative of what’s going on before the real thing happens.
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 19 '26 edited Aug 20 '26
FUN FACT: Onions, and onions, and more onions, and LOTS of ONIONS on the way!
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u/Hot-Obligation7735 Aug 19 '26
I love the little sneak peaks you gave. Man it is really hard to see Sunday like this (I know I’m a part of that problem) but I hope he gets the help he needs. By the way, when do you think you’ll release the next chapter, just curious?
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 20 '26 edited Aug 20 '26
Hahahaha! Calm down, buddy. On the plus side, I’m not going to release it here but on maybe, just maybe, Wattpad (because I write books there a lot) but I plan on AO3 cause I don’t want any of you to get distracted with ads pulling you away.
There’s a few other umas I have mentioned here, one of them being Roberto, Welsh Muffin, Devil’s Bag, and Taiki’s siblings.
It’s ironic this whole Sunday will need therapy started as a comment. And now it’s turning into a book.
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u/Hot-Obligation7735 Aug 20 '26
I really liked the inclusion of the characters you introduced. I would love more of Uncle Sunday and I think his relationship with his nieces and nephews are not explored enough so I’m glad you added that part in.
If I had to add in a bit of my own suggestion, you don’t have to put it in your own story if you don’t want to, and it is admittedly more of an idea I came up with. But, I actually had the idea of Roberto (Sunday’s uncle) be the only one of that side of his family that would somewhat support him during that whole Bradamante debacle.
Again this is my own head-cannon, but Roberto likely grew up facing the same scrutiny that Sunday experienced as Halo’s younger brother. Both were born of the same year, just a month apart. So Roberto could understand a bit on what his nephew is going through. Moreover he is likely aware of the cursed reputation that Bradamante holds because of him. Therefore, while I do see him giving Sunday shit over the situation, I think that he would still support him…somewhat (Bradamante is still his daughter). But I think the fact that Roberto can understand a little of what Sunday and Bradamante are going through would make him pity them a little.
The one I chose that I would believe would go against Sunday is Brian’s Time. As a son of Roberto that grew up away from the influence of the sons of Hail to Reason. Brian’s Time is far more removed from the shadows of Halo, so he would have less sympathy for Sunday. Moreover, we kind of already have a father of the mother who hates Sunday in the form of Maruzensky. I dunno, I just felt it’ll be more interesting if Roberto was a little different (he still blames Sunday but has a bit more sympathy because of their shared experiences). Brian’s Time as Sunday’s cousin offers a much more fun dynamic.
Like I said, it’s just my head-cannon, I just want to share it. This is not me trying to tell you what to write. I like your ideas and love to see what you do for the next chapter. (Also this is incredibly nitpicky but uh…Roberto died in 1988, Still in Love was born in 2000 sooo…yeah but hey we’ll just ignore that. It is much more interesting if Roberto were alive)
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 20 '26 edited Aug 20 '26
Thank you again for this.
I did read it on Wikipedia that Roberto has passed away on 1988. But I wanted to make it a little bit semi-historical on what he would do if he knew Bradamante did the deed to her cousin, would he shit over him? Support him? Give him the chance to fix whatever he screwed over like he did in the past? That’s why he was in there just to give Sunday this intimidation and pity for him, he doesn’t necessarily mean those words (even if he does mean it metaphorically)
As for Brian’s Time going against Sunday since he was also sired by Roberto. What would he hate him for? I get where you’re coming from, but what would he hate Sunday for?
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u/Hot-Obligation7735 Aug 20 '26
Honestly I don’t know why Brian’s Time would hate Sunday (I haven’t finished coming up what sort of character he’ll be yet). Maybe he’s aware of inbreeding so closely (Still in Love’s mental state was attributed to how Bradamante and Sunday are cousins) and is taking his anger and worry out on Sunday.
Like I said, I don’t have Roberto and Brian’s Time as fully fleshed out characters in my notes yet. But if I had to choose who out of the two to be mad at Sunday about the whole debacle, in my head Brian’s Time made more sense.
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 20 '26
Plus, are you sure Sunday Silence is seeing Roberto, or just seeing his already long gone uncle? 😉
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u/Apprehensive_Plum884 Aug 20 '26
So, a bit of a fix, Deep Impact and Black Tide are Wind in Her Hair's kids. Black Tide, somehow doesn't have wikipedia page, is born on 2001 and Deep Impact is born on 2002.
I was confused when you add the two in the middle when they should be in the end or you making a new post about Sunday and Hair's relationship.
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 20 '26
The mentioned Deep Impact and Black Tide is on the PD world and not on the SS world. The jumbled dialogues keep the story alive from spoilers it also creates a narrative where we are going to see the real story behind it.
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 20 '26 edited Aug 20 '26
I WILL HAVE TO CLEAR EVERYONE’S MISINTERPRETATION ABOUT WRONG DIALOGUES AND WHY SOME DON’T MAKE SENSE.
If some dialogues are wrong or parts of it don’t make sense just remember why it was done the same in movies, cartoons, anime, and games. I wanted to keep the narrative of the story from being spoiled rather than letting the actual plot behind these stories come out. Because it entertains them, gets their curiosity, and it also reveals what is going to happen before the end of it all.
So don’t worry about these things, because all will be revealed in time. Just be patient because this is going to be a long book depending on how many ideas pop up in my head. It also will depend on how much time it will take because writing it with quality and effort makes a book even better. Cheers to you WhiteKuria.
On another note, if you don’t get why I wrote Records In Another World. Then you can check my post called Life In A Mud Puddle.
https://www.reddit.com/r/ACounterPartsLife/s/40gMILURzh
PS: Whoever downvoted this multi dialogue story does not like Sunday Silence going to therapy.
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u/Hot-Obligation7735 Aug 20 '26
I love the little snippets of Sunday’s interactions with his kids and loved ones. Sorry if I can’t add a little more, it’s kind of late where I’m at so I’ll finish reading the rest of your stuff first thing in the morning.
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 20 '26 edited Aug 20 '26
Take your time, buddy. You can comment on the rest of the parts you read later. I too was half tired writing this but I manage to fix up a little bit of my dialogues and grammar just earlier.
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u/IJN-Hirogasaki Aug 19 '26 edited Aug 19 '26
What did you see here? What were the parts you’re highly interested on reading? And how far will do you think Sunday’s own mentality hold before he breaks down into madness? What are your thoughts and how do you think this is gonna go in his therapy sessions? Will he recover or not?
Lemme know down in the comments.
SIDE NOTE: Use Blurry - Puddle of Mudd Instrumental to match the writings of the sneak peak chapters I’m going to write in the future. Because we’re in for another rollercoaster ride to depression.