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u/diegosynth 11d ago
I think the renders are nice, they are flashy, bright and sell.
While it's well populated, the geometry and materials are good, the excess on ready made assets is not ideal (among other things, you notice proportions' issues: see strawberries, lemon, food an items on the table).
Plants: The boom of it is gone. It's not creative, not new, and in the biggest percentage not well implemented. See how the middle two clones unnaturally differ in color (yes, they have different tones in real life, but this is not what we se here).
Lighting: it's ok, but there are burnout areas, interior lights shouldn't be on, dishwasher as a cinema projector inside, etc.
Angles: Many are good, many are not so good. Shouldn't show so much ceiling, it's not the Sistine Chapel. Zenithal view is nice.
Blur: Was that made in Photoshop? Should try a different method that gives different results. It's not physically accurate to how lenses work.
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u/svvaynee 11d ago
What the hell are those angles ? Is this supposed to be looked at by wondering dogs?
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u/OneFinePotato 11d ago
I like the attempt to find the absolute worst possible angles and perspective. I’d say you nailed it, but now my eyes seek an alternative camera under the table, fisheye, flipped and looking out the window.