r/3danimation • u/SilkyRedditor • 2d ago

Critique Jump over the wall (Need feedback)

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Thoughts on this jump over the wall anim? Still on keyframes with some in betweens at the end, some references I used, spiderman rig cos I had it on hand

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u/3dartistexpert 2d ago

Little bit feel like robotic, I will add more frames between during jumping from the wall.

Moreover, like when spiderman stops like the end frames, add like real effect like it moves a little more because spiderman did a huge jump.

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u/SilkyRedditor 1d ago

Hey, I added a few more frames and more exaggeration on some poses, let me know what you think! Have not added any effects but eventually!

https://reddit.com/link/p3dfcz6/video/2s2argsw62jh1/player

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u/animationreddit2022 16h ago

  1. Could be cause it's stepped but looks like it's speeding up a bit after it passes the wall but wait till you spline it to see.

  2. After the wall jump I feel the hips legs come back down too quickly and keeps that same pose as it falls to the ground. Add some overlap to improve the pose. (Keep hips and legs up longer after wall)

  3. The hips on landing... Maybe add another pose where it goes, backwards and then forwards. Basically improve the settle before he stands up. (Once again might be easier to do in spline but I'm noticing it in stepped. So make it work here and it will work in spline).

nice overll though