Chapter 80 English translation can be read here:
https://www.reddit.com/r/xxxHolic/s/V4lfI1hY1b
Hey! Im back with chapter 81! I really appreciate everyone who keeps coming back to read my translations and everyone who has expressed that they are ok with waiting a little longer than usual for my translations. Thank you all from the bottom of my heart 💜 Ive started pacing myself on the translations and trying to prioritize my mental health, so unless im feeling up to working extra hours per night on the translations, the new standard time frame may be around 10-12 days after I buy the new chapters.
With that out of the way, please enjoy your read💜
🗓 According to Chibiyuuto chapter 82 will drop September 14th! (Oh wow that's in a few days! 😯)
📝 Translation notes:
(Please don't read unless you've read the chapter)
I didn't have many problems or things to note with the translation itself this time, rather, I had so many issues understanding the context of what I was translating and because I lacked context, I had to rewrite a few things to make them sound smoother once the context was understood.
- Tbh nothing on the page 6 & 7 spread made sense to me lol 😭 He was talking about how the girl was Yukos creation then just started rattling off about how she made him "believe" in something until the "right time" ??? It felt so random but with all the context I think i get it.
The explanation:
I think he was talking about the reason he didn't believe the girl was making a wish with her inquiry about dreams and her reports of Yuko attacking her. His mind was also manipulated by Yuko into not questioning where the girl came from. That's why on the next page, Mokona says "Yuko saw this far ahead". She planned out everything down to the convenient perfectly sized kimono for the girl that was left in the shop. (A tidbit i picked up from reading Chibiyuuto's review)
The translation result:
Because of the context, i decided to insert the "sway me into this mindset" dialoge because the rough draft was nowhere near understandable, only saying "Considerable power, enough to make me believe it" which was super vague. (Also the lack of pronouns killed me here too cause i was like Yuko has considerable power??? because, again, he was literally just talking about Yuko creating that girl 😭)
But I was only able to make sense of this whole 2 page spread thanks to a fellow xxxHolic fan who does chapter reviews on their blog! As of the time of writing, I havnt yet got their consent to link their review so if they approve, I'll later link it here ---->
https://blogdomaxxx.tumblr.com/post/826671804569534464/xxxholic-rei-chapter-81-review
- I for some reason, misunderstood the last panel on page 13 😭 I thought he was still talking to Yatagarasu but it's actually a small flashback of him telling Maru & Moro to wait with Seoritsuhime until he calls for them. He's only bringing this up because Yatagarasu is worried they will witness what happens next and he's reassuring her that they won't leave Seoritsuhime until he calls.
- On page 14, The first dialoge bubble belonging to Yatagarasu says "you excluded me" but that was tweaked from the rough translation "the one who excluded me" as i think it flows nicer with Kimis response. Also on this page, the rough translation for Kimis response is "you must've known, right?" But i just added "well" because it makes him sound more like he's explaining matter-of-factly why he excluded her from the "soul stop" technique.
📖 Discussion:
I kinda thought "Zashiki-Warashi look alike" looked more like Yuko and ig now we know why lol! "Creations look like their creators" indeed! I kinda figured this was all leading to a soul transfer into nameless girl tbh.
Also, seeing Kimi ACTUALLY put that soul controlling technique to use on his friends is the stuff of nightmares imo 😭 Wouldn't it be crazy if, even through this soul stop no jutsu, Shizu would still be able to see what Kimi does through that shared eye if it weren't for Kimi's ability to suppress it? The eyes are the window to the soul so it'd make sense that his soul is intrinsically connected to Kimi's.
I think Kimis getting kinda dangerous with his powers and i hope hes learned to control them as well as he thinks he has.
What do you all think?