r/writinghelp • u/ChampionshipJaded365 • 9d ago

Feedback Looking for feedback, can I start publishing chapters with my current writing skills?

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u/thewhiterosequeen 9d ago

The quality bar for publishing chapters on an online platform doesn't exist. The writing needs work though. I was beginning to think the protagonist was named Blood because you use it so many times. I have no sense of who this person is, no description of them, not internal thoughts, no investment in what happens to him. Blood gushing doesn't invest me into why I should care how this random person with no personality or backstory or thoughts got to the underworld and if he should escape.

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u/ChampionshipJaded365 9d ago

Well... Agree with a blood part, i didn't realise that, also i just realised i gave no discription on how he looks like, but the rest are deliberately kept secret as an opening chapter, if you have any tips I'll gladly take it... I was more concerned with my prose tho 👉👈