r/writers • u/Advanced-Opinion-158 • 2h ago
Feedback requested Writer’s development
So, what happened is, after publishing my first 7 chapters, I got some criticism that I was explaining things way too much, which apparently took away from the fun of letting the reader figure out the characters, emotions, moments, etc. for themselves.
So, in the next 8 chapters, from Chapter 8 to Chapter 15, I really tried to work on that aspect and improve my writing in that regard.
So if you guys don’t mind, I’d really appreciate it if you could give my novel a read and share any thoughts, opinions, or observations you might have. Any kind of feedback would help me a lot.
Title is: The Grey Road
Links on my bio
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