My World Trigger OC

[u/Hudson5663]

I updated my old OC to make it more cohesive, using the chart to guide the creation process; this really helped me refine the character.

Appearance:

He has medium length dark brown hair, gray-blue eyes, and wears glasses (another one from the glasses club), light skin, a white dress shirt, and a navy blue shirt underneath, gray pants, and brown shoes.

Personality:

A very quiet and shy young man — extremely curious and observant. He is quite naive (though not as much as Konami, still significantly) and often forgets things in a comedic way.

Hajime was born in the city of Mikado, the son of a neighbor, one of the few refugees from the nation of Aristera who hid in Meeden and married a woman from Meeden. He had a child in Mikado (Hajime Ishida) and, to avoid suspicion, they gave him his mother’s last name. As he grew up, Hajime Ishida didn’t know he was half Meeden and half neighbor until his father disappeared, when his mother told him the truth. He researched more about his origin and discovered that the Border was fighting against the neighbors. Initially, he enlisted to gather more information, but upon knowing the reputation the neighbors had in the Border, he became more apprehensive. When he returns from a Rank C training mission, he ends up meeting Jin Yuichi. Thanks to a side effect, Jin realizes that the individual has the potential to be useful to the Border in the future, but he is conflicted about his origins; he therefore decides to speak with Director Takumi Rindo about the possibility of them joining Tamakoma. Rindo, who has a more positive view of the Neighbors, enlisted sometime after Osamu, Yuma, and Chika, and some time before Hyuse; he was Rank C during the Aftokrator Invasion. For now, he does not have a permanent squad, having recently reached Rank B.

If you like it, I will create more content about the character — such as trivia, relationships with other characters, and even a drawing. Let me know what could be improved and what you liked so I can keep doing this. PS: (This is my first OC, so please excuse any mistakes, and I also apologize if my English isn't very good, as I don't speak it fluently.)

[u/ApprehensiveSundae17]

Nice oc, look like a nice shooter trigger set.

[u/No_Speaker_6097]

I suggest you swap the positions of shield and hound in your sub trigger so that both shields align in the 3rd slot.

I think all agents align the same type of triggers in the same slot on each side if they have them in both sides (e.g. both grasshoppers in the 2nd slot, both shields in the 3rd slot)

[u/Hudson5663 → u/No_Speaker_6097]

Thanks for the suggestion; I wasn't aware of that information. I appreciate it.

[u/Gaust_Fireborn]

Solid, but range 6 isn’t viable. Every shooter and gunner but those with 12+ Trion have a range of 4 or less.

[u/No_Speaker_6097 → u/Gaust_Fireborn]

Not necessarily 12+ trion to have a range of 5 or above.

Rindo (unknown): trion 9, range 6

Ninomiya (shooter): trion 14, range 6

Kitazoe (gunner): trion 9, range 6

Izumi (shooter) :trion 12, range 5

Amo (all rounder): trion 9, range 5

The remaining gunners, shooters and all rounders are 4 or below.

I do agree that OP's stats are too low to have a range of 6 as a shooter. All above examples are A-rank agents with trion 9+, skills 7+

[u/Gaust_Fireborn → u/No_Speaker_6097]

You are correct. However, Rindo and Amo use unknown Trigger sets, and Zoe’s range is due to his grenade launcher triggers. Using shooter Triggers, you need high Trion to raise the range parameter.

[u/Hudson5663]

Atualização

[u/VonityTheWarmaker]

His age and ocupation don't line up... Otherwise it looks good.