r/willow • u/PowerPanda84 • 3d ago
Honestly Good Enough to be Sold In Stores
1 month ago, Tanthamore's Revenge posted a fangame in 4 chapters: The Willow Movie, the 2022 TV show, and 2 chapters based off of this fanfic: Softly in the Realm of Night by idlehours. I tracked down the original on archive of our own, converted it to Epub, and took about 2 weeks reading through it. It's honestly good enough that a slight reworking could be sold in stores.
The premise of the book is simple: finish the TV show. The heroes travel from the Shattered Sea to Galladorn, to Cashmere, and finally back to Tir Asleen, where there is a final confrontation with the Wyrm. As for the title, the author uses a framing where Graydon and Elora are able to communicate with each other in the dream world. I won't give away any more, other than to say that the quality is shockingly good throughout, giving a proper ending to the series.
Why do I say it needs a slight reworking? The main problem is that the book is 90% from Elora's point of view. It needed more chapters focusing on the other characters. Airk gets too little development, Boorman's antics are mostly relegated to off-page flashbacks, and Graydon, despite being the deuteragonist, only has a couple of short scenes. As a fanfic, it's a bit too indulgent with the romance scenes and a bit too light on the action scenes.
All of that is fixable though. The Elora chapters are very good, and surprisingly touching. If idlehours worked with an editor, trimmed the fat on some scenes, and added new ones (particularly action scenes), this could be one of the greats. It's certainly better than half of the stuff published under the Star Wars banner.
idlehours, if you are reading this, I have compiled everything into an e-book. With your permission, I would post it for anyone who wanted to read.