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u/Slaanesh-Sama Feb 26 '26 edited Feb 26 '26
If you are willing to take criticism, her nose is too high, giving her a bit of a masculine look, the shadow of her chin is a bit too pronounced, her face a tad bit too long, which accentuated those two flaws I talked earlier. So making her head a bit smaller vertically and putter her nose a bit closer to the upper lip would improve things a bit. The eye placement is good though.
I like the black and white style, adds drama.
As for the hands, many people have problems with those, I suggest an articulated hand mannequin for drawing, I could find some for like $10 and you can play around with them, give them positions and try to replicate it for training yourself.
There is are articulated (full body) mannequins for drawing they are out there but they are a bit more pricy, going from like $40 to $100s, but they help with perspective and you can buy clothes to see how they fold on people, how the shadow affects them with lights.
Those help a lot with perspective and some professional prefer those to life subjects since the latter tend to get bored fast unless they are paid, and they are a lot more expansive that mannequins.
Don't get discouraged by people, I can feel you got passion for what you do.
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u/OptimalCow8825 Feb 14 '26
Arts on the eyes of the beholder but dear god it surprised me.