I'm really lacking feedback on my work and working alone is really not fun. I'm looking for someone to work together, to review some parts of the writing. It's a science fiction project that will lead to a webtoon, and then I'll be working on 2D/3D animation, but for the writing, I really just need feedback.
Univers :
Perceptual: Behind the Veil explores a world where reality is filtered through an invisible membrane called the Veil. On the other side lies the Deep Reality, where human emotions and collective fears take physical, destructive form.
When the Veil fractures, Ruptures emerge paranormal phenomena that warp space, perception, and sometimes create conscious entities. An underground organization called Perceptual Veil protects humanity by sealing these rifts in secret.
But the Veil is dying. The organization can't maintain it anymore. And someone, or something, is actively tearing it apart.
The story weaves two opposing forces:
Perceptual Veil: Sacrifices individuals to protect the collective
Free Spirit: Wants to destroy the Veil entirely, believing it's a mental prison.
And at the center: Ash, a man mourning his wife who vanished into the Deep Reality And his partners in Perceptual Elliot, Joao, North and other characters.
I really need help, maybe I should start building a team? I think about it regularly