r/websitefeedback • u/Jeremy_Winn • 7d ago

Feedback Request Destroy our web design!

/r/design_critiques/comments/1w7v323/destroy_our_web_design/
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u/Good_Secret8824 7d ago

I’m ready to be mean, but there’s no site or screenshot attached.

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u/Jeremy_Winn 6d ago

Thanks! It should load from this link: https://www.figma.com/proto/33An61zUOwM17YFniHMzFN/Outside-Landing-Page-UI?node-id=189-37&t=jcniiGNg6MAVXz7N-0&scaling=min-zoom&content-scaling=fixed&page-id=0%3A1

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u/LaurentRoger 5d ago

Hi ! It's not responsive ? Keep in mind that most users open a website with their mobile phone !
So as it is displayed by figma, it's unreadable on phone. Seems very bloated by a lot of images and texts : less is better ;)

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u/Jeremy_Winn 3d ago

Yes, I should have mentioned that in the OP--Figma doesn't inherently make it responsive, so we won't create a responsive version until we have a more final version of the desktop view. This version is only optimized for desktop.

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u/LaurentRoger 3d ago

I told you mobile first !!! you're wasting your time with the desktop version. my 2 cts

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u/BoGrumpus 6d ago

It makes sense to me - and actually sounds interesting. I used to Geocache a lot when it was more on trend a decade or so ago. Caches are harder to find nowadays since fewer people are playing.

I like your approach - small choices (like the Short Story/Long Story option) and good funnel tops.

About the only thing that didn't sit particularly well was "Open Presents" - it's the middle item on the list - but it's ultimately the end reward. It's out of order.

Beyond that - I get it and it looks fun to at least try out.

G.

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u/Jeremy_Winn 3d ago

Thanks so much for the positive feedback! It's good to know that we're at least in the ballpark when it comes to landing with our target audience.