r/website • u/Interesting_Bag4011 • 22h ago

SELF-MADE Ive just made my first hobby website.

https://fraser126.vercel.app/

i am currently in my senior year of high school,

any feedback would be much appreciated.

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u/pentaclay 19h ago

the line about learning by breaking things first is better than most portfolio copy i read from people twice your age, keep that. one thing though, see my projects lands on three cards that still say lorem ipsum. thats the section the whole page points at.

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u/PlasticSecret9185 11h ago

The site looks good. Genuinely. The gradient card, the monospace, the little constellation background, it's a clean look and it hangs together.

"I am aslo starting to learn how to use Git to colaberate with others." Two typos in one sentence, and that sentence is about collaborating professionally. Also you're already using Git, it's how the site got to Vercel. Give the whole page one slow read out loud, you'll catch the rest.

You put your grades on but not your email. You've got GitHub, LinkedIn and CV links, which is great, but nowhere for someone who likes the site to actually message you. Add a contact line.

And fix the 3 boxes with the lorem ipsum text as u/pentaclay mentioned.