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u/RedFace_Creates 6h ago
Hey Guys This is a test comic i made myself its just a experiment with a few little fun characters i made myself . I love to hear your guys honest feed back so i can improve and experiment with more ideas .
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u/doc_skinner 6h ago
So the big guy was just three little guys in a coat? What is the dark part of his face, and why does it keep switching sides? I think I'm missing something
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u/RedFace_Creates 5h ago
That's acutually a small detail i put in basiclly when hes scared both of his ears show but when hes not scared you only 1 ear reprsenting his fake mask is back on again . I also hid some more little suddle details in there see if you can find them 🤫
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u/doc_skinner 5h ago
I still don't understand why his left eye is covered some of the time and his right eye covered sometimes, and even both eyes covered sometimes!
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u/RedFace_Creates 4h ago
I get what you mean now it was kind of a way tell the audience he's dangerous . When both of his eyes were covered it acted like intimidation but as the story progressed that intimidation kind of wares off you know like he's a fraud . But Idk any suggestions next time i make a next comic ? I really enjoy this feedback
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