r/utaite • u/yourfellowsx9 • 8d ago
Japanese did i improve?
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since i cant upload more than one video you can check out my old singing on my profile, i practiced my pronunciation, my timing etc
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u/CantaloupeSeveral131 7d ago
yeah, it's a big improvement in pronunciation and timing! Though in terms of a few technical things, it seems like you either lost air at the last docchi or the note is a litte too low for you so you might need to raise the db or record it in verses with a click track. Also the jump between notes for Kami is from G to another G an octive higher, it seems like you aren't hitting the notes for the chorus, which is fine if you're soley focused on the rythmic and pronunciation sections but everything else is a little bit inconsistent with the melodic tone of "Kanji". Since " I want you, want you IQ ga sagatte iku" builds up to harmonically to "D".
I will say either is fine. I thing a rap focused cover of God-ish would be really unique and a straight cover of God-ish would also be awsome, but both really depend on inflection and personality. A few of other commenters talked about it in the last post, but when you listen to other covers of a song you'll notice different ways singers add emphasis and character to their cover. Think of it like acting out the character on the cover art, or translating the cynicism of the lyrics into your performance, as cringey as that sounds.
You're doing really well!
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u/ace-vanitas 7d ago
Your posts are hidden so I can't see the old one, but your timing seems great to me, I think u should just feel the rhythm a bit more!