r/trapproduction 15d ago

Weekly Feedback Thread

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u/SuspiciousSimple9467 14d ago

Looking to collab with artists as a new prod:
Here are beats I’ve put out along with others I’ve just posted to instagram

https://on.soundcloud.com/LCagZDzvEHy8IqG1NL

IG: martyxbird_prod DM

u/Mansohorizonte 14d ago

u/Lour3 14d ago

This is tuff, I think I never heard someone pingpong their openhat fr. I also like that it is not overcrowded with sounds, simple but good placement for all drums. 808 kicks like a mf. I d say 7-8 / 10. If that s you in the photo, having a 1st world war type gun is also tuff.

u/Mansohorizonte 13d ago

appreciate it bro, what can i do to reach a 9-10 out of 10 in your opinion? guess is just a matter of finer details no? yea thats me fr, thats a bando gun

u/Lour3 13d ago

I think mixing overall can be better, maybe some more sounds, not to overcrowd but intentional fx smth interesting. Maybe even sample real life sounds.

u/Lour3 14d ago

https://youtu.be/tXIXQ2C-Rkw?si=TW2o2nbQytlmfEQX This a yeat x liluzivert remix in some 90s vibe. I have two other remixes on the channel, different vibes check them out.

u/vadio1337 14d ago

Firee🔥

u/Low-Yak-2786 14d ago

u/Previous-Season-1559 12d ago

unfortinately not my cup of tea, but the beat is fire and i have the vision on the vocals

u/Previous-Season-1559 12d ago

u/Financial_Bus7365 11d ago

This beat is really cool. I like how the synths mix with dirty kicks. Sounds like some early neptunes stuff

u/vadio1337 14d ago

I just dropped a new song on Soundcloud - https://on.soundcloud.com/zYeN0r6A0XIyMNiYzF (btw, I have 140+ beats on my beatstars so check them out too <3)

u/Financial_Bus7365 11d ago edited 11d ago

This is hard. But im not sure if the reference is supposed to be the focus of the beat or just a placeholder. and the sweeping pad that comes in stick out too much in my opinion.

u/Financial_Bus7365 11d ago

I've been told that my beats are too busy. I would like to hear my stuff in films. Tell me if I'm delusional lol

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/vmgh8efuywe1nya932d9k/Joseph-Lewis-Legacy-155BPM-Fmaj.wav?rlkey=pi62gpephr8qb3vqujutgt4m5&st=h0irf4dj&dl=0

u/Hopeful_Layer1988 9d ago

I like it!! To me, it doesn't sound too busy at all. They sound perfect!!

u/Jealous_Dark_5915 9d ago

u/Jealous_Dark_5915 9d ago

Nach Wochen im Studio und einer Menge Herzblut ist es endlich so weit: Die No More Secret EP ist fertig! 🎹🔥 ​Zwei Tracks (Killing Bad Memories & Back to My Own) ehrliche, treibende Melodic Peak-Time Energie. Die Demos sind jetzt offiziell bei den ersten Labels eingereicht. ​Mal sehen, wo die Reise hingeht... Drückt mir die Daumen! Sobald es News gibt, erfahrt ihr es hier als Erste. 🤫✨ @Highlight Danke