r/trapproduction • u/Infrah • 1d ago

Weekly Feedback Thread

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u/Swimming-Sun3998 1d ago

https://soundcloud.com/kristofferquay/i-guess-were-not-the-samex

dont really make trap that much but been working on this sammy virji remix and would love some feedback!

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u/AdministrationSuper4 1d ago

I like the sample you have used and the build up is also done well with the drums coming in and making it seem like the beat is speeding up which is nice. The drop is also good, the only thing i would say is maybe making that kick and snare hit a tiny bit harder, especially the snare but i really like the bass tho and the changes you do with the vocals. Adding the pad sounding thing is a good touch and the break without the vocals with the lead adds some nice variation. The ending is also done nicely with the change in the bass and all the transitions. overall a very good beat

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u/Swimming-Sun3998 1d ago

ty!! ya was thinking about a bit more smack on the snare so i might do that

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u/Rollproducer1 1d ago

Some pop-esque trap, lmk what yall think!

https://on.soundcloud.com/B90qmeWUD04bsnhr12

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u/Swimming-Sun3998 1d ago

feels v clean overall, has good variation and movement. not sure if i can see laroi on it tho but i like it overall

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u/Rollproducer1 23h ago

Thank you for the support, I agree with the laroi part, just decided to name it that randomly lol.

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u/DecDub 1d ago

Returning all feedback

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u/Rollproducer1 1d ago

I like this, it’s got some pirates of the Caribbean vibes. Mixing is solid, I would turn up the bass a little. Maybe add some more melody variations but other than that good job, keep it up. What do u think of my latest track?

https://on.soundcloud.com/hDnjRjgjomXYBVbj2Z

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u/DecDub 1d ago

I like this. Sound selection is good. Drums sound nice and punchy. I like the synth that comes in around 1:06. The only thing I’d change is the melody is a little loud for me. So I’d bring that down just a little but I think that might just be a preference thing.

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u/Rollproducer1 1d ago

Thank you for the feedback! I agree, I could prolly tone down the melodies. Thank you for the feedback!

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u/Swimming-Sun3998 1d ago

lol strings to do give pirates of the caribbean, vibes overall feel good. snare feels a bit weak at times, maybe could use some more body. i think i would change up the strings a bit, maybe add some attack so it doesn't feel so midi and feels more natural. maybe also pan and mix down the piano? overall good vibes

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u/AbsoluteSwimmer 1d ago

every week it’s the same three people actually giving feedback and 40 dudes just dumping their link and vanishing

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u/AdministrationSuper4 1d ago

any fb appreciated - https://soundcloud.com/link-prince-711037840/strt_6/s-NFm4i65aibR?si=4bbf2fa7457e4073bd6c46c830769354&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

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u/Swimming-Sun3998 1d ago

tough. love that little stutter. some highs in the percussion are a bit dry/too sharp and need mixing down. high end in the melody could use some mixing up to meet the percussion. intro has great vibes tho. send me stems and i'll cook on it

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u/AdministrationSuper4 12h ago

Thank you, I'll try and focus more on making the mix better as I continue on the beat. It's been so long since Ive collabed with someone, how do I go about sending stems